Things we know about Aoi:
* She works as an OL.
* Generally good at whatever she does.
* She's not particularly happy with her life.
* She has a childhood friend(?) living with her.
* Said friend(?) is dependent on her.
* Getting married to someone she doesn't really know.
Things we know about Chi:
* Might have depression or something. (It looks that way to me at least. Some of her behavior is painfully relatable for me.)
* Not very pleasant to be around, generally speaking.
* She likes Aoi I guess? I don't see it, but I think it's meant to be implied that she does?
* Some sort of novelist or mangaka or something?
Maybe I've missed something important, I don't know. But I don't find myself caring enough to look for it. I don't know what I'm supposed to think about this. Is it supposed to be funny? Dramatic? Both? Something else entirely? Maybe it's trying to be nothing at all? If so, mission accomplished. I understand this is just the first chapter, but the first chapter should give me some reason to be interested. Maybe it's trying to get me interested by actually starting some time after the first chapter. That would certainly be... a bold idea? I don't know. Maybe I'll look through chapter 2 when it appears, but only because it might explain what the hell this was.
edit: wow this was made by the person who made Yurigurashi? I actually liked that one a lot, mostly. Maybe they're just better at short form stuff?
edit2:
I'm probably going to regret throwing my hat into the ring here, but regarding ditching the guy, whether we should feel sorry for him or not, whatever... We know literally nothing about the guy other than "He has a good enough income". For all we know he could have been the perfect person for Aoi. For all we know he could have been a yakuza, or an alien, or a parakeet controlling a human-sized robot. There's literally nothing to judge here. I guess we're assuming he's just kind of average, but even then there's still no reason to like or dislike the guy, or to care at all. He was a background character. A plot contrivance the author put in so Chi could burst in and sweep Aoi off her feet. He's scenery.
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