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That was cute. Really nice one

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Wonder if we are going to find out what happened to Ruka's mum ... Suspect it wasn't passing away quietly of old age

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Great to see Joe and Kanna back

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This is a fun one. Thanks so much for the translation

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Runa and Kasumi - really like these two.

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I really liked this chapter. I like the use of the three stages of drunk Aya in a non-comedic manner. Her exaggerated sadness (immediately jumping to "does she not love me anymore") seems realistic for a drunk person. Mistuki needs to stop being an idiot, of course. Avoiding even looking at her for this long because she felt awkward? Seriously.

Yeah, but let's not forget the fourth stage "clingy bug" is yet to come - if in this stage she gets clingy with Shu ,,, well either Mitsuki will either explode & act, or go into complete shut down.

Going on the trajectory so far, I'm going to guess it's shut down and we will get more chapters of the downwards spiral.

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I'd forgotten about this one - many thanks to the Cyan Steam for bringing us these extras and reminding me of the series. Might just have to do a re-read.

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Hopefully the darker parts will not get too dark and we will get lots of fluff - really loving the artwork

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Considering what we have seen of her background so far it's not surprising that she fell so hard for someone who treated her nicely and as a human being.

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Just read the whole lot - great story so far, really love it.

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Just felt that it is worth mentioning that the bar has a corner set up for live music and there's a guitar (Mitsuki previously commented on how expensive looking it was) - got a feeling this is going to come into play here.

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Don't you see the vision? Shu and Rinko are in the same room, they're going to help Aya and Mitsuki talk by bringing up something music-related and they're going to hit it off with each other in the process.

Yes. I can see this is going to get interesting as Narita is there as well - hopefully we are going to get Aya and Mitsuki back together, with the resolution to Mitsuki's musical impasse, and also Shu and Rinko hitting it off.

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It could be that, due to the oringial peer pressure to do the confession (chapter 1), he never really considered them to be going out anyway - it was all just for show.

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Harsh... but it had to be done, as Mitsuki tends to be the one to help others and ignore herself.

Absolutely - that plaster needed ripping off and, whilst it may hurt short term, it will be best in the long run

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It's cute seeing both girls on the same train completely defeated by the unintentional gravity both Aya and Mitsuki have.

Yes, it didn't really register first time around but this could be where Shu and Rinko become aware of each other.

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TL here.

In this chapter, all the Japanese sentences between the scenes are actually connected from one place to another.

What the characters say and think is all part of the same stream. In Japanese, the thoughts of Shu and Rinko, the words of Mitsuki and Aya, all connect seamlessly. In line with the title and the theme.

I tried to render that, but I'm not sure it comes through properly in English.

Sumiko puts a lot more work into this than you think.

Thank you so much for this - it comes across great

Would really like Shu & Rinko come together through Mitsuki & Aya - for all their ups and downs, I can't see either of them cheating

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I suppose she could say that "My Girlfriend's Not Here Today" ;D

Astraea Hill
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I dunno why but I imagine Haru's singing voice sounding like Emily from Linkin Park's.

Yes, I can see that.

I first heard Emily Armstrong's singing in Dead Sara (not heard anything from them since Em joined LP), especially the tracks Sorry For It All and Weatherman.

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It's okay Rinko, get it out of your system now and move on with your life.

(Watch as the next month of updates is devoted to her)

Get introduced to Shu and bond over unrequited loves ;D

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Rinko shoots her shot...

Mission Failed.

"Ain't it a shame, to be shot down in flames" - AC/DC

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Oh! Isn't Aya wearing Mitsuki's Nirvana hoodie that Mitsuki was wearing in the very first chapter?

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Yeah like Chizuru, who aside from being one of Aya's besties, was a major supporting character has just vanished. And Hasegawa's disappeared too.

Bit biased as Chizuru was my fave tho but still

They're in college. Hasegawa's still in high school. They're not gonna be around each other that often.

Chizuru, also, probably went to a school somewhere else. It's what happens when you hit that point in your life. Everybody goes off to do their own thing. Sometimes you keep in touch, sometimes not.

I expect both of them will make a reappearance at some point.

Oh yeah I completely agree that from a real world pov it makes sense. But from a stroy perspective it is weird to me that important characters who had multiple pov chapters are just gone with no comment.

Sure they'll pop up again but would feel better imo if we like saw Chiruzu in the background still working at the shop, or someone commenting on being in touch with Hasegawa about music.

Absolutely with you here, there's a difference between real life and a story - if a character is introduced it kinda odd for them just to drop out with no comment.

I would really like to see Chizuru again

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Some cute Sorawo faces in this chapter :D

I get a little confused where I am when reading this as I have this version here, the LN that I buy on Kobo reader and the Manga (again on Kobo) - and they are all at different points in the story. Makes it fun none the less.

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IDK why but this whole chapter seemed really familiar. Has this series been posted before?

This is a re-do of the original series

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Pick up my guitar and play
Just like yesterday
Then I'll get on my knees and pray
We don't get fooled again

  • Won't Get Fooled Again, The Rolling Stones.

You tried to fool us, it's by The Who ;)

You are absolutely right
I have no idea why I wrote the Stones! Posting without brain switched on, probably