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Go Yuki, dive right into this toxic mess ;D

Aoi%20nagisa%20-%20s
joined Aug 17, 2012

Yall want a single being "loud"?!

I think it might be a combination of the phone volume being turned up a lot and Shu, possibly, not being used to Western music like Korn - how many times has anything that is not mainstream pop been derogatory labeled as "noise"?

Aoi%20nagisa%20-%20s
joined Aug 17, 2012

Ah, it looks like Shu may be, perhaps unintentionally, reminding Aya that she and Mitsuki communicate best through\with music.

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joined Aug 17, 2012

That was so good.
Thanks for the TL
I really love this series

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joined Aug 17, 2012

Love those two

Aoi%20nagisa%20-%20s
joined Aug 17, 2012

So good to see these two again

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joined Aug 17, 2012

Not that it's likely to happen but there might be the possibility that the post-coital clarity and stress-relief lead to a pillow talk heart-to-heart about what's been bothering Mitsuki~

Hoping that this is the way it goes, but as you said it's unlikely to happen

Astraea Hill
Run For It! discussion 08 Mar 17:27
Aoi%20nagisa%20-%20s
joined Aug 17, 2012

Cute

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Aoi%20nagisa%20-%20s
joined Aug 17, 2012

Yes, Kon is back ... Feel sorry for Mari though, I hope she finds a girlfriend along the way.

Aoi%20nagisa%20-%20s
joined Aug 17, 2012

So are they going to go back to doing everything together?

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joined Aug 17, 2012

it's so funny that this was just directly the ending she'd been looking to make lmao.

And like, I don't even dislike the ending it just doesn't really fit the rest of the story. So yeah, in a way I can totally see this was the ending Yatosaki Haru was set on from the start. She did not change it even though as the story evolved she probably should have. Regardless. I still liked it overall, I'm not letting a clunky ending drag things down.

Honestly, the ending could have worked fine as it is, the author just needs to work on pacing a little. Compressing everything from the truck to Lily sacrificing herself into one chapter completely obliterated the pacing and made both the sudden tragedy and ultimately happpy ending feel more confusing than anything else. If they had stretched that out over 2 or 3 chapters (plus maybe another chapter to let Mai angst a bit before revealing Lily was still alive), the ending would have felt far less abrupt, and there would have been more time for viewers to adapt to the changing tone of the story. It might have required them to tighten the story in other places, but the results would have been well worth it.

Ultimately, for a first attempt at creating a long-form story, this was pretty good, but there’s a lot of room for improvement.

I agree with this - it's a good story and overall I liked it, but (as said above) the pacing was not handled as well as it could have been, and it's Chapter 19 (IMHO) that really throws the pacing off.

I really enjoy Yatosaki-san's artwork and story concepts, so I hope we get more just a little better put together in terms of plot pacing.

Aoi%20nagisa%20-%20s
joined Aug 17, 2012

I enjoyed that, though Ch19 did stand out as a little "different" to the rest.

Astraea Hill
Aoi%20nagisa%20-%20s
joined Aug 17, 2012

I liked that one a lot

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joined Aug 17, 2012

Yatosaki-san posted on Twitter "We’ve received many inquiries about an English edition, and we might have some good news to share…!
We’d really appreciate it if you could wait just a little longer"

Definitely will be buying a copy if this happens <3

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Tsundere tag unlocked lol

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I'd love to see a scene when it suddenly starts to rain and the lobby of a love hotel is absolutely rammed with couples getting rooms to "dry off" after getting soaked lol

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Cute toxicity

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A Taste discussion 01 Jan 11:18
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"It was delicious"

Yes, yes it certainly was

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Aoi%20nagisa%20-%20s
joined Aug 17, 2012

sighs What in the world is going on with the translation....? Shakes head It's so bad I think I'll just give up reading this series.... =_= plenty of other things to read that are either consistent, or release a full dang proper chapter each release...

Yeah, right. I could post full chapters every 4 months. Or wait for the volumes.

The author said on twitter there's a volume every 3 years..

I buy that magazine only for that manga.

And tbh, if possible I wouldn't buy it at all because it's a trashy magazine.

Kirin-Kun, there's a lot of us here that really appreciate your work. Thank you.

This has started coming out, in English, on Kobo Reader here - Vol.1 out & Vol.2 to pre-order (due May 26), so quite a long way behind what we are on here.

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Also, is that a Hinata side ship I spy...?

We can certainly hope so

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Aoi%20nagisa%20-%20s
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That was so cute. I really love this series.

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"Mai Lady" - I liked that :D

I now always think of Kobato Miku of Band-Maid whenever I see "Moe moe, kyun kyun" as whilst I have never been to a Maid Cafe, I have seen a few Omajinai-Time.

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joined Aug 17, 2012

also girl is that a vibrator just laying on the floor...
https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/my_devilishly_sweet_girlfriend_ch11#9

Got to admit, that's what I thought as well, lol

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joined Aug 17, 2012

“Creative differences”—it happens to every band.

Absolutely... well perhaps not every band, but it is something that does happen quite a bit and I think it's reasonable to conclude that's what is happening her.

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This is the reverse situation to the school prom, where in that case it was Mitsuki saying she wasn't going but then turned up.

I think that Mitsuki knows that the band, as it stands, is not right for her but she seems not to have the confidence to move on. I hope Aya turning up will give her the push to change things around.

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