Well that was really intense and hot! and they were bitting... that's not fair... I wasn't expecting to see that.
Like Pyoro said, when I started reading this and remembering the reaction in the forum, I was carefully analyzing all the gestures and everything but when she slapped her, I had to laugh because it was so weird, I was thinking
Is she going to apologize?
Is she going to cry?
Is she going to embrace her?
And then BANG she hit her and that totally kicked me out of the immersion, I know, she's trying to put her out of the shock but wow, not like that!
And the intense sex was almost perfect except for the already mentioned weird drawing at times, like those parts where the nose is higher than the eyes.
"And with that, you disappeared before my eyes"
Author-san, don't use a cheap trick like that, she has to take responsibility somehow, if she actually disappears forever I'll be truly disappointed, I don't want a "I'm now in my third year, no one knows what happened to her, I found a new love but the memories of that day will always remain [End]" ugghhh even writing this feels bad.
Of course I won't read spoilers and people that at this point didn't drop it when they didn't like it.
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