many webtoons have what I would characterize as a parkour civilization conception of social hierarchy

I don't understand that reference. Could you explain?

judging by the comments, good thing I didn't read this lol only made it through the first page and was already put off by the awful art style (which isn't bad, it's just too perfect and idealistic, "gorgeous" in the bad way), can't even imagine what reading the rest would have been lol

God what kind of shit story is that.
Seriously putting aside that hardly anything makes any real sense the story telling itself is just trash.

Ngl after reading a omegaverse manhua with a similar style. I'll probably drop this one too bc they'll probably censor kissing or any nsfw parts.

Ngl after reading a omegaverse manhua with a similar style. I'll probably drop this one too bc they'll probably censor kissing or any nsfw parts.

is the one of the omega heroine wants the alpha villainess or something? I like it a lot and want to find something similar lol.

Eh, I’ll give it a go.

I think we need a slavery tag. The current tags don't cover the material, or prepare you for how uncomfortable it is.

I genuinely hate authors that think "you did these deeds, so there for you being a slave / sexually abused is justified". It's always an excuse for a fetish that revolves around reducing someone to nothing, along with it removing their ability to consent. The whole setup in these types of stories is always a poor excuse to sweep to rape under the rug. Someone drugged in this state can't consent, and regardless of how someone wronged you making them into a slave and assaulting them is disgusting.

What makes this even more unsettling , and frankly unrealistic, is that it’s supposedly meant to develop into a romance between the two "rivals," as suggested by the main story cover. However, I fail to see how such a relationship could be anything but toxic, especially considering how the dark-haired lead saved the other main lead with ulterior motives.

Well, that was quite the start... May get better from here, may get much worse. I guess we'll see...

I, for one, won't be around to find out.

This is actually so ridiculous that I might follow it just for the laughs.

"Oh no my improbably hot captor is teasing me!"

"Hehehe... I, a general of some sort with a convenient backstory shall now punish this improbably hot catgirl for her crimes of.... um... yeah, don't worry about it. It'll be super sexy though."

What's up with all these bad bilibili comics? It's gotten to the point where I wonder if I should even bother giving them a try when I come across the longstrip tag. I don't know if it's just what happens to make it to this site, but most Chinese gl comics I've come across have this same superficially pretty artstyle, abhorrent world-building and clumsy dialogue. It's just like opening the webtoon app to see all these royal/isekai romances that feel copy-pasted from one another. I get that this is a fetishist story, so I wouldn't have too high expectations when it comes to storytelling, but this seems to be a problem that plagues the webcomic industry as a whole. I'm tired of seeing these low-effort comics everywhere. The funniest thing about this one in particular is that it probably won't even have any NSFW parts, because it's hosted on bilibili, even though the whole setup is clearly just an excuse for the author's pet fetish lol

What's up with all these bad bilibili comics? It's gotten to the point where I wonder if I should even bother giving them a try when I come across the longstrip tag. I don't know if it's just what happens to make it to this site, but most Chinese gl comics I've come across have this same superficially pretty artstyle, abhorrent world-building and clumsy dialogue. It's just like opening the webtoon app to see all these royal/isekai romances that feel copy-pasted from one another. I get that this is a fetishist story, so I wouldn't have too high expectations when it comes to storytelling, but this seems to be a problem that plagues the webcomic industry as a whole. I'm tired of seeing these low-effort comics everywhere. The funniest thing about this one in particular is that it probably won't even have any NSFW parts, because it's hosted on bilibili, even though the whole setup is clearly just an excuse for the author's pet fetish lol

It's just Sturgeon's Law into action

many webtoons have what I would characterize as a parkour civilization conception of social hierarchy

I don't understand that reference. Could you explain?

I would also like to learn more. ^^

Maybe they memory wipe the general in order to prevent any leaks of classified intel? That's all I can think of as to why they'd do such a thing

A much cheaper way to prevent leaks is to just shoot her in the head. The military is nothing if not efficient, and they have all the guns. At the very least, if they care so much about what the former general might have known, they should not put her amnesiac self in the vicinity of enemy officers, who (as the first chapter demonstrates) can take her captive without any resistance from anyone present. In short, this whole premise still makes zero sense apart from titillating and gratifying a very particular set of kinks. ^^

All the negativity in the comments makes me want to read this, but I prefer the classic b&w. Still, thanks for translating this!

Did they just started in the middle of the plot? I'm so confused

Maybe they memory wipe the general in order to prevent any leaks of classified intel? That's all I can think of as to why they'd do such a thing

A much cheaper way to prevent leaks is to just shoot her in the head. The military is nothing if not efficient, and they have all the guns. At the very least, if they care so much about what the former general might have known, they should not put her amnesiac self in the vicinity of enemy officers, who (as the first chapter demonstrates) can take her captive without any resistance from anyone present. In short, this whole premise still makes zero sense apart from titillating and gratifying a very particular set of kinks. ^^

It remains to be seen whether there is even any truth to that. The brainwashing comments come from the humans witnessing her behavior after being given the aphrodisiac, and her own words that she doesn't remember may either be a temporary condition caused by that, or simply a lie, as whenever we actually see her thoughts, she's still at least trying to resist the drug and scheme her way out of her predicament, even if mostly unsuccessfully.

What's up with all these bad bilibili comics? It's gotten to the point where I wonder if I should even bother giving them a try when I come across the longstrip tag. I don't know if it's just what happens to make it to this site, but most Chinese gl comics I've come across have this same superficially pretty artstyle, abhorrent world-building and clumsy dialogue. It's just like opening the webtoon app to see all these royal/isekai romances that feel copy-pasted from one another. I get that this is a fetishist story, so I wouldn't have too high expectations when it comes to storytelling, but this seems to be a problem that plagues the webcomic industry as a whole. I'm tired of seeing these low-effort comics everywhere. The funniest thing about this one in particular is that it probably won't even have any NSFW parts, because it's hosted on bilibili, even though the whole setup is clearly just an excuse for the author's pet fetish lol

Both GL and BL have some similar issues. Out of curiosity, I’ve read a few BL stories to see if there were any patterns like the ones in GL. In both genres, the characters are often drawn with unrealistically perfect looks that conveniently fit Chinese beauty standards. There’s also a tendency to fetishize the characters in ways that can feel dehumanizing.
The main difference is that BL tends to be more intense, sometimes involving physical assault. There’s also a clear dynamic between the characters, where the "top" is usually portrayed as strong and muscular, while the "bottom" is smaller and more delicate. I’m not trying to bash BL as a genre , it’s just interesting to see these storytelling choices. Since it’s all fiction, there’s room for creative freedom depending on the artist’s vision and how much they want to lean into realism of incorporating same sex relationships.

some good BL of my recommendations would be:
Love Is An Illusion
Fools
Heesu In Class 2

Yeah, no.... I've seen this plot many times before and It never did it for me. Very easy pass on this one...

I don't think she's actually amnesiac and is just faking it to get out of her predicament. I think the female lead also thinks she's faking it too, that's why they're playing a sort of cat and mouse game right now (which kind of ties into the title about hidden intentions showing). Knowing MC is fully aware of what's going on makes the story easier to read for the enemies to lovers trope. It is a shaky start but im still interested to see how it goes.

Hm, not my thing either. I read the first three pages to evaluate the toxicity for my own, but got bored by the tropes and kind of soulless art. I guess if you are into the drama and strict roles that characters fit into, maybe this is not all that bad.

I was struck by how much the art style looks like Clandestine Affair. The latter has a more engaging story though. But I'll see where this goes.

Regardless if she's faking the amnesia or not, she better keep calling her Master from now on, I'm still bothered the android manga stopped doing that.

Also everyone talking they have seen this before, where is more of that mythical slave animal girl yuri? No BDSM, no humans only, no adopted Kemono girls in a RPG party, real slavery with animal eared girls. Just because it happens all the time in hetero stuff doesn't mean it's common over here.

… why am I more bothered by the writing quality than the humiliation catgirl slave stuff?

At least the odds of this awakening anything are low.

I genuinely hate authors that think "you did these deeds, so there for you being a slave / sexually abused is justified".

While I am guessing this story is primarily an expression of the authors' fetishes, from the world-building perspective, I find it strange that a soldier would keep such petty grudges against another soldier, especially if they are both generals. Also, why memory-wipe a commanding general for losing a war? If they committed war crimes, sure, arrange a tribunal or hand her over to the winners directly; otherwise, just demote them. Surely, the state has more profitable jobs for a highly-educated, star-ranked veteran than prostitution?

It's like someone wanted to slap some military uniforms onto their BDSM-themed catgirl porn without knowing the first thing about warfare.

Well if "s-rank officer" wasn't the first thing to tip you off that this isn't the most knowledgeable about warfare...

Anyways, generals can be extremely petty assholes. Patton and Montgomery are famous, but there's also the two Russian generals who fought the battle of tanneburg who refused to cooperate with one another, plus the well known IJN V IJA rivalry.

Also wow this thing really just starts going at it with the speciesism and the extremely uncomfortable vibes. I think I'll pass.

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Welp, this is someone's humiliation insert.

Sometimes you just want to eat cheap junk food. This is the Junk food of yuri.