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Damn it wasn't really bad but the pacing was all over the place really jumpy.
Than again Alice is only like what 9 years old so it actually makes sense that her story doesn't make sense.

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joined Jan 13, 2015

How Demons do skinship.....
I mist disagree with the first comment I think this is by far not enough especially because it's a one shot. I do think it's a bit sweet yes but the serious lack of material makes it hard to form any actual connection with the story.

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joined Jan 13, 2015

I swear I hate these 4 page one shots.
It's so hella frustrating the thing starts and is literally instantly over.

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I really hate weak willed people like her. That last page the moment she comes at me like that I would give her the middle finger and fuck combo and leave.
She has obviously an absolute trash character and just screams problems but hey MC lacks a brain when the story calls for it.

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joined Jan 13, 2015

And the rapist teacher has appeared was only a matter of time. That bastard practically screams I abuse as many stundents as possible.

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joined Jan 13, 2015

I swear this has to be one of the most unsatisfying ending of manga history. I mean it literally end in the middle of the story directly at the start of what should be the final arc.

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Finally one of them shows some balls.

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joined Jan 13, 2015

Damn this Hiroko is disgustingly stupid. Seriously even for a manga this is to much.

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Keine is taller than Mokou

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joined Jan 13, 2015

I really love this manga a lot. But what the hell. That was like 5 months of waiting for 5 pages. I mean really what happened?

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Thank god for this chapter. I was so incredibly frustrated after that bullshit end in 37 and with all of this thank you for 4 years this is the end crap I actually thought that it would end with us hanging in the air what their relationship is like. Even thought this feels a bit hasty and not completely thought through its still better than that other crap.

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Wait wait wait. This one page at the end is everything??? There is at least one chapter missing here. After such a ride the whole thing end just with some timeskip and this coming home thing. Also this coming home thing explains nothing about what their actual relationship is what the fuck.
I know writing a good ending is the hardest part of a story but that is litterally a punch in the face of every fan.

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What the hell is wrong with this stupidly lazy writing. I thought we were over this kind of stupidity 30 chapters ago but no why give them character growth when they can go through the same trash again and again and again. I like this manga a lot actually but this is disgusting. In my eyes they don´t work together at all. They are so insanely immature and dump it hurts to look at them. These topics aren´t even embarassing they just have literally no trust in each other I mean why just talk when it´s way easier to just act like trash to each other.
So let it be resolved like all the other stupid fights they had so that they can do it again after this because learning is for idiots.

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Ahhhh it´s really a shame that there is only 1 chapter each year until now.

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joined Jan 13, 2015

That's it?
Don't get me wrong here. It wasn't bad or anything. But i kinda expected atleast last a while longer...

My thoughts exactly. It was nice to read and I liked it a lot. The ending just came sorta out of the blue.

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I wish the author did more with people having special characteristics, it just felt like the other characters would’ve been more interesting if they were able to show it off at some point in the story. Overall, this was a meh story with a disappointing plot and a happy ending

Exactly my thougths. I mean first chapter hey many people are born with some kind of "gift" with them being very different and here is our main character which has a single wing. Sounds interesting BUT it is NOT. Because they never talk about that again. No other gifts, no one tells us why her wing must be kept secret the newspaper senpai who starts of as a blackmailing I get what I want girl but does more or less nothing at all and than some 3 years later time skip ending.
The idea looked like someone had an idea but after 2 chapters they just forgot it giving some cliche story that makes characters which could be interesting into some kind of boring "was told a thousand times already" ..... lets call it story.

If the author is happy with it, thats OK for me and yeah it is by far not the worst story I have read but promising people something interesting in the first chapter only to directly throw away everything and only use it as some kind of "thats how we meet and its the best thing for me" kind of tale is just such a waste.

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This looks like it will be a good ride.

looks more like it will become more stupid over time if you ask me. While I know it´s possible to confuse the gender of the person in front of you they are literally in the same class. did they never have PE together and wondered why the "boy" is in their changing room.
As a Yuri fanboy I will of course read it. the artstyle is more than nice enough and I want to see how unrealistic stupid they will get over time.
But looking at it objectively this is incredibly weak.

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Regardles of what will happen in the last 4 chapters or so the one thing I would really like to see would be a coming out. Way to many Manga just ignore this or never speak about it. Also I think its unlikely that they are just lovey-dovey for the all of the last chapters. There is still enough time for one last short arc.

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Aside Chapter 7 there are also 5 Chapters from a Prequel Series translated but they are not as "harmless" as the normal one so maybe they are a bit to much for this site.

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So this is the Manga version of the Video than? but it should be a bit longer.

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I´m literally sick of these abusive/asshole family plots. It´s not only boring and overused but also more than unpleasant to read. Its the same with this arranged/forced marriage shit. Parents who are doing this should be skinned alive as slowly and painfully as possible.
That this would happen was already "hinted" early enough and I really should have stopped there and now it goes on I´m so heavilly underwhelmed and unsuprised by the lack of creativity the author displays here that.... it´s hard to put anything else but disgusted as my currrent mood.

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That snip of paper Kurosawa was holding, Thats the one from the first chapter right? because that would be kind of awesome.

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DID IT JUST END THERE?

So I´m not the only one who thinks that it just ends with the intro. I mean normally there should be aome middle part and ending and not just an opening.

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That Chapter really made my day. Thank you so much for the translation.

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Damn what a nice easygoing read.
The ending was ... well OK it was nice in fact after all it was nothing more than a nice slice of life Manga after all so its fine but when I read the last page seeing it was finished I just thought ehhhhh thats it....just like that? But its still good enough as an ending after all its really hard to write a good end for a story.