Forum › Posts by Chikaon

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Lmao Diana has a type

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Oh man thanks for translating this AyaChisa doujin! I love it when they're both being greedy.

Chikaon
Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

How the heck is this subtext lmao

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

I've read a lot of harem stories where different members are popular which usually means the author has done a good job of showing why their attractive, or a bad job at distinguishing them. Maybe the Sophia fans aren't commenting, but damn it feels overwhelmingly Olivia favored. That kinda makes it seem like the author hasn't done their job well.

olivia has seen much more impactful development than sofia, and possibly even screen time but i cant say that for sure.

Tbh I'm not too mad at a Sofia end because she was super cute and sweet in the first few chapters. I enjoyed their dynamic and I enjoyed Sofia as a character. But when they started introducing the other characters, she started getting shafted and we as the readers kinda forgot what was great about Sofia since Olivia had the more engaging storyline. I do feel characters like Sofia are harder to write engaging storylines for compared to "villainous" characters like Olivia though.

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

machino saying this is also her precious love... but after alluding to sofia having the love she values most? i kinda wonder where this will go (and hope that it's just, "i love everyone please be gay with me")

I think it's just her realizing the love she has for Sofia is romantic love, while the love she has for Olivia is platonic love. Like she still "loves" all the girls from the game, but can now differentiate between the different kinds of love and acknowledges that even platonic love is still a "precious love".

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Not too surprising but Olivia is still best girl

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Nooo only one more chapter left? Well it was a good run and honestly longer than expected so I'm satisfied.

Prob not gonna happen, but think itd be hilarious if we see the ex get together with senpai loool

Chikaon
Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Always happy to see a new scanlated nicotori doujin every year. Happy birthday Nico!

Chikaon
Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

The whole arc with Miwa's mom was so sweet. Such a wholesome chapter

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Kinda wished they got the breaking up with the boyfriend done already since he's been such a non-issue, that it's kinda weird they finally brought him back up again in such a serious manner lol.

Chikaon
Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

I adore this pair. Thank you so much for the translation!

Chikaon
Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

interesting choice to have a complete background character, the black hair glasses girl just be in several panels all of them either glaring at Mitsuki or so small that you can imagine it radiating in the background.

Black hair glasses girl is the narrator. Watch the dialogue closely. Mitsuki speaks but never narrates.

Oh totally missed that! I'm guessing the black haired girl then has a one sided crush on Mitsuki.

Interesting concept, but yeah im always left wanting a bit more by the stuff written by this author lol.

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Overall I liked the story and enjoyed Hikaru and Hana's relationship, but I wished the last 2 chapters focused more on Hikaru and Hana's thoughts/life than on Harutaka's. That's the only meh thing for me. I really wanted to get more into Hana's head!

Thanks for translating this series!

Chikaon
Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

I’m happy to see this being picked up here, because on other sites like Dex it only has about two chapters and has been that way for a while. Hopefully we’ll get to see the other chapters here too. :)

It's a newly released series and it's only been around a month since the first chapter was posted (20 days since chapter 2). I don't think that's long enough yet to be considered "a while" lol.

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Basically, what we have here is the typical "Perfect Girl feels empty because everyone loves her -superficially- but no one really knows and/or likes her true self and everyone who said they loved her felt disappointed because she wasn't perfect as they expected and left" with Hikaru being the first to accept her.

I'm such a sucker for this trope so I'm still highly enjoying what this series is putting out and I still love this loser of a woman (like Hikaru ^_^)

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Spicy extra! Super nice. Glad to see at least a little more of these two together before officially saying goodbye ;_;

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

I love pathetic toxic women

Chikaon
Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Thank you for the translations and scans! This was fun and woulda been nice to see a continuation of these two. And yeah I def see a lot of similarities to "Breasts Are My Favorite Things in the World!"

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

If she wanted to write a toxic drama, she should have taken inspiration from Flowerchild or other mangaka well verse in that type. Here, nothing makes sense, to the point it's funny. Which is a bit disturbing somehow for a seasoned mangaka..

Interesting that you think so because I think everything makes complete sense and Ohsawa Yayoi knows exactly the type of story that she wants to write here. I think so far the writing is very tight and every chapter is significant to the plot. She's pacing out the mystery of the mess that is Hana extremely well and I don't think she's trying to make any character here "rootable" or "likeable".

This is also too much for me to make the character believable. I feel like she is just a device plot to keep the story going.

It you can make sense of those characters, well, you can try to light me up. But we are already past the half point of the story, and we have yet to see Hana's point of view, or seing more about their past that would explain Hikaru's obsession with her.

About the husband, saying that he wasn't written to ben likeable or relatable while tons of people are rooting for the het couple on a yuri forum, that's definitely not very honest...

I think that is where we differ in how we see and enjoy the story. You're trying to relate or see realism in these characters, but I'm just seeing these characters as concepts (or as you said, plot devices). Hana and Hikaru are extremely interesting to me because they are on extreme opposite ends in character personalities and it's interesting to see where they will lead the story. They're fun because they're not realistic and relatable.

What's engaging about these characters is the "why". Like why is Hikaru so obsessed with this girl who is 5 years older than her since she was 5 years old? Why is Hana obviously stringing along Hikaru who she knows has been obsessed with her since childhood?

I don't think the author is necessarily making the husband "likeable". He's just the concept of the "loyal, faithful partner" to counter the "dangerous, exciting homewrecker" and those traits are what a lot of people find "likeable". Frankly I find him pretty boring and it's obvious to everyone (even himself) that he comes 2nd in Hikaru's heart. The story is just to see what concept Hikaru is gonna choose in the end.

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

If she wanted to write a toxic drama, she should have taken inspiration from Flowerchild or other mangaka well verse in that type. Here, nothing makes sense, to the point it's funny. Which is a bit disturbing somehow for a seasoned mangaka..

Interesting that you think so because I think everything makes complete sense and Ohsawa Yayoi knows exactly the type of story that she wants to write here. I think so far the writing is very tight and every chapter is significant to the plot. She's pacing out the mystery of the mess that is Hana extremely well and I don't think she's trying to make any character here "rootable" or "likeable".

I like most of Ohsawa Yayoi's stuff and if the quality stays the same for the rest of the series, this will be up there in the top of rankings of her works for me.

last edited at Feb 18, 2026 12:39AM

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Woo hoo it's back and just as unhinged as ever!

Chikaon
Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

I'm reading it as Hitomi and Mikiya are still dating, but now Yuuri has closure after her talk with Hitomi. But maybe it's meant to be up for interpretation.

Chikaon
Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Oh god im surprised they didnt mention at all how it'd be a bad idea to be filmed by popular streamers while theyre on the run???

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

This series has been so funny pulling these scenes of dramatic unease, only to have it play out fairly realistically and tamely

Chikaon
Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Yayyyyy finallyyyyy! Still thought the dragging out of the past few ch was unnecessary, but I really enjoyed the talk Ema had with her friend in the beginning