Firstly, loved the chapter, though honestly, part of me wanted Nanao and Asumi to interact with one another a bit more. Ouka with her shit-eating grin 100% caught onto Nanao, which made for some amusing moments and I'm wondering if these two will interact, maybe bond over how cute Asumi is or something.
Now, with the developments of this chapter, there are several ways I can see this go, and I'm not sure which I prefer. I will say this - GO BIG.
In any case, I've seen quite a few comments mention Mai, and honestly I understand though don't necessarily fully agree. I definitely don't think the plot has strayed or gotten lost. Truth be told, I simply adore Nanao, so that might be why I'm so eagerly strapped on for this ride, but I do feel regardless feel that there is a method to the madness. Besides, everything so far has been so goddamn good, I personally don't mind any side trips or the like. I feel compelled to say that this is my opinion and I'm not saying anyone is wrong. In any case, looking forward to the next chapter. Go big.
Now that I'm in a more comfortable spot, some more thoughts:
(1.) Seeing Nanao almost lose herself was amusing and actually kinda hot, but it's also really nice to see how much more open and honest she is with herself, and she almost was honest with Asumi. Though, honestly, I'm glad it didn't come this early. I'm enjoying Nanao being a disaster, but also she still has some things to work out.
Also page 6 with the glance was just fantastic. Buddy you ain't slick, or something along those lines
(2.) Mentioning the shower scene, while there was some tension to it that gave it a bit of spice, when Asumi thanked Nanao for coming and told her she wanted to get closer to her was legit meltingly wholesome. I loved that moment.
(3.) I am very amused by how not-subtle-at-all Ouka is. Like, on a general level, but specifically about the whole love hotel thing. "Like a whole visit's worth..." and, "I think you're also familiar..." were gut-busting. She's almost selling Asumi out completely in the most nonchalantly casual manner.
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