I really like the twist here. Forget the cliche "found her friend on the first try!" Now we're in for a (slightly) less improbable meeting. But even if her friend wasn't there I thought this worked really well as a sweet one-night-stand type story. I'm interested to see how it turns out.
On another note, I saw the tag Pay for Gay and thought they'd added a second, reversed tag of Gay for Pay. Too bad, as the slight distinction might be the difference in whether I want to read a story. Glad I read this anyway.