ch 41, pg 08, "even it it hit her right in the face" should be "if"
ch 43, pg 07, "dispose of them would useful" should be "would be useful"
ch 43, pg 14, "being to rash" should be "too rash"
ch 44, pg 04, “She will remove the will to fight with mystical” … with “mystical” what? This sentence seems unfinished.
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