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ch 43, pg 15, "I'll just check the storefront is all closed up" -> "if the storefront"

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pg 05, "has been a quite a defect to your life," -> "has been quite a defect to your life,"

EvilDevil
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pg 34, "kittey" -> "kitty"

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The Lily Blooms Addled

minor error on pg 6 fixed

EvilDevil
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minor error on pg 6 fixed

EvilDevil
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pg 6, "way to clingy" -> "way too clingy"

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minor error on pg 3 was fixed https://exhentai.org/s/72d723fb81/1723278-3

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A Monster Wants to Eat Me

minor error on pg 18 was fixed

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pg 1, "I head" -> "I heard"

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ch 6, pg 8, "not want make" -> "not want to make"

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ch 10, pg 17, "who will be the ones take" -> "to take"

EvilDevil
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ch 55, pg 1, "good time at fancy place" -> "good time at a fancy place"

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Cat maid plays with her mistress, but only after work, pg 2 "as much you" -> "as much as you"

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Cynical Dog

pg 6 error was fixed, also new pgs were added

EvilDevil
Cynical Dog discussion 16 Aug 13:00
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pg 6 error was fixed, also new pgs were added.

EvilDevil
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pg 4, "by side" -> "by my side"

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ch 49, pg 02, "because a bit of a junkie playing it at night," ? maybe "became"?

EvilDevil
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ch 9, pg 22, "to tell you can't" -> "to tell you you can't"

EvilDevil
Cynical Dog discussion 04 Aug 15:14
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pg 6, "But this won't enough." -> "But this wont be enought."

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pg 12, "what was is that" -> "what was it that"

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ch 9.5 pg 11, "I was the one said that" -> "I was the one that said that"

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ch 4, pg 08, "she hasn't filed acomplaint" -> "a complaint"

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pg 7, "your warmth through your your lips..."

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Overture discussion 22 Jul 15:39
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pg 2, "heirarchy" -> "hierarchy"

EvilDevil
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pg 22, "heirarchy" -> "hierarchy"