pg 6, "This should be able boost" -> "able to boost"
ch 7 pg 18, "she bad with spicy food" -> "she's bad with spicy food"
https://x.com/nyxxmph/status/1809454946317680909
ch33, pg 76, "the pick out" -> "to pick out"
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ch4 pg 22, "agel" -> "bagel"
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pg 32, "we so fun" -> "were so fun".
pg 47, "your your dog" -> "your dog" "lead" -> "leash"
pg 8, "don't really along!?" -> "don't really get along!?"
ch4, pg 16, "we're we're"
pg 4, "for for being late" -> "for being late"
pg 16, "seem to be problem" -> "seem to be a problem"
pg 120, "all its own" -> "all of its own".
pg 12, "you neve" -> "never"
ch 13, pg 3, "wanted thank you" -> "wanted to thank you". pg 7, "this the place" -> "this is the place"
pg 8, "like when when" -> "like when"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7nmyS2vKGPk
ch 7, pg 20, "you warmth" -> "your warmth"
Shit, we made the bad guys too reasonable, lets make them do something unforgivable so readers wont sympathize with them too much.
pg 6 "used used"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7NrAHat93qA
pg 19, "like the put" -> "like they put"
pg 8, "there's a lot of differences to parties with everyone the same gender" -> "with everyone of the same gender"
pg 11, "I can't just act like I know understand all on my own." -> "like I now"
pg 18, "I naive enough" -> "I'm naive enough"
I interpret this dream that Ed is a good role model to look up to.