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joined May 3, 2014

are we gonna hand wave poor writing with the idea that this is just “ waky comedy”?

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joined Sep 27, 2017

are we gonna hand wave poor writing with the idea that this is just “ waky comedy”?

For me it's a non serious rom-com where two characters fumble their way through figuring out their sexuality, and so far it's entertaining. I'm not worried about the writing quality myself lol

Ykn1
joined Dec 20, 2018

What a way to arrive at a confession... :D

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joined Sep 10, 2022

are we gonna hand wave poor writing with the idea that this is just “ waky comedy”?

Yeah and we'll have a good time too.

last edited at Dec 3, 2024 1:25PM

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joined Apr 10, 2023

It's not bad writing, just silly. The author is hitting the target they're aiming for, not the one you want lol.
Also lmao @ that poster saying MC should apologize to her dumb bf for "cheating". Nahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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joined Oct 22, 2018

Honestly, MC should just listen to the airhead here. Her relationship with her bf was mostly done out of obligation to their friends who shipped them together anyway, they never did anything couplish, and MC didn't look into it when the bf tried to do something couplish. And now that she's obviously showing enjoyment of kissing the airhead and the resolve of her denial started to crack, and with the airhead finally coming clean as to her reasons... This is probably the easiest for everyone (except the friends whose shipping got mc and bf together, but who gives a fuck about them lmfao (unless that one girl from the first half of the second chapter was one of their number, in which case I kinda feel bad for her specifically, but not for any of the others lmfao))

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joined Jun 6, 2014

this shit gas

the most accurate comment yet here

joined Aug 11, 2022

MC should just break up with him already...She should also sincerely apologize to him (Mostly cuz of the minor cheating...best not to tell him that part tho and claim they should have it end it sooner due to no chemistry) and just try out a possible relationship with this new girl (As friend at first for a few weeks before officially dating...)

Isn't this too thorough and analytic???

Meh, not really. It just the most logical conclusion of possible best actions MC could take after just a thinking for a couple minutes...Though for the MC she will likely not come to that conclusion that fast.
The start as friends first before dating thing is mostly due to avoid being viewed as shallow by her friends(Should not care what the friends think but sadly people are irrational sometimes)/Future Ex-BF and to avoid any possible backlash/hate plus to test the waters out if their personalities fit with each other (They both dumb and gay...We already know they probably fit but best to see by hanging out first lol).

Though I doubt the author will go the dating route right away, most likely drag the process out a bit before the break up (MC trying to deny at first) and dating actually starts but I will be surprised if they actually starts dating fast like next chapter instead of like 3-4 chapters later lol...
Heck, the author could even go another route like BF dumping her to date a cute femboy guy instead of having to break up with him herself like some comment were joking about in early pages of the comments XD

Author writing style is full on comedy, we know this already from the author previous work like the lesbian incest twins (Very wholesome cute and silly)...Wait a minute...? Check to see both author and artist. Hmm, not sure who Noshiro Ryo is though? Alternative pen-name or newbie author being help by the friend artist that made the useless lesbian incest twins?

Anyways we know this manga is made to be silly and cute, something to be enjoy and not thought about too hard if your know about the author's(Artist??) previous works and the past couple chapters that we have read of this series (Though the minor cheating aspect leaves a bad taste for some people.)

Hopefully the break up with the BF will be not too painful or annoying...Nah, it's probably fine. BF-kun might even be chill with it considering the light heart comedy aspect of this manga.

last edited at Dec 3, 2024 7:01PM

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joined Apr 19, 2018

They both have the stupid, and it's terminal.

Yeah

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joined Jan 3, 2022

As long as they’re smooching every chapter, I don’t care how stupid they act

2.1 chapters in and there’s already a confession. That’s something all right

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