Reminded me of the NoaHina date in wataten.

Okay, Evie is smoking hot when she's relaxed and not a disaster. That confidence does things to me.

I hope the system pops back up urging Evie to kiss Elsa during the show

A few hiccups here and there but the date is going pretty well.
No taks yet. Maybe the system just gave up lol.

Evie’s suave as hell today, damn

This chapter is so cute and wholesome. The beginning of this chapter is a wonderful, upbeat follow-up to last chapter, too.

What this story now needs more of from Evie, after the shift in their relationship, is organic

clarification: to show readers, and eventually Elsa, to understand why Evie is/was the things she does/did

self-reflection from Evie: e.g. on the nature of the world and its relationship with both of them. Like is the world really a game she precieves it as? And even if it is partially, who gives a crap? ;

change of mind and mindset from Evie;

and action from Evie that starts out moderate, then snowballs.

When it comes to organic progression from Elsa, nothing really springs to mind right now. But up to now it has greatly complemented Evie; and one thing I massively appreciate is the independence of her actions. It makes her feel alive in a sense, not 100% predictable. I love when Elsa initiates something and it causes Evie to have a variaty of stong reactions, lol. The scenes that don't have Evie in it definitely lend well to this independence.

The rare different POV form other characters also sort of legitimises the concept of independence in this world. A world that is antagonistic in some sense to the concept. Tho it is failing, and may be slowly giving up on that, lol.

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Cute, cute, cute!! Just hoping this system doesn’t do something crazy during the play!

Thank you for such a wholesome chapter!
Man I should have prepared myself for sugar overdose and also beautiful art..
Also the meatpie is still whole here so my reaction's pretty much the same as Elsa's

They are so adorably cute together, they make my heart melt <3

I see, I see. It's good that after all this time she's built up a tolerance, huh? Otherwise she'd melt into a pasty goo at the sight of Elsa's devastating cuteness. Right. Ok.
... And she still doesn't get it?
I want to kick something.

Evie's outfit is so good

I wish they hadn't done the "eat the messed food" bit. It's so... old and tired and done to death.

I think they do it at least once in every romcom in the shop. I have read some really old romcoms in my day, hetero for-boys stuff like from 30 years ago, and it's the second or third most used trick when they try to come up with a reason for the cute and popular girl to fall for the dumb nerd mc: she tries to cook something, messes up, but he eats it nonetheless and her heart goes pitter-patter for him. The only ploys that are even more commonplace are "she falls for him after she sees him feeding a stray kitten" and the absolute most popular "she falls for him 'cause one time he did for her some random everyday thing that was kinda nice" which ranks number one in all the charts.

For real, I wish they hadn't used such a silly (un)dead horse trope in a yuri manga that I like. There's no need to go there, dangit: Elsa is already head over heels for Evie and this for a long list of very good motives that have nothing to do with the old tired clichés of shounen romcom.

So precious.

Honestly surprised the villainess system didn't kick in this chapter.

I'm worried what the system is going to do today. Hopefully it won't mess up the day now than it did earlier

I'm worried what the system is going to do today. Hopefully it won't mess up the day now than it did earlier

In the next chapter, while in the theater, the system still not showing up for the rest of the chapter, lol

Reminded me of the NoaHina date in wataten.

Seems like I wasn't the only one

Yvonne looked pretty cute herself in that outfit...

Oh, she's definitely the real one on a whole other level today between the two.

I'm worried what the system is going to do today. Hopefully it won't mess up the day now than it did earlier

In the next chapter, while in the theater, the system still not showing up for the rest of the chapter, lol

Vilainess System, the greatest yuri wingman

When she thinks she's girlfriend material but she's actually girlfriend girlfriend material. Smh

I thought it was choccy pie

Fay as guck.

Fay as guck.

GOOD

I wish they hadn't done the "eat the messed food" bit. It's so... old and tired and done to death.

For real, I wish they hadn't used such a silly (un)dead horse trope in a yuri manga that I like. There's no need to go there, dangit: Elsa is already head over heels for Evie and this for a long list of very good motives that have nothing to do with the old tired clichés of shounen romcom.

I went on a picnic for my 6 year anniversary with my girlfriend. Cooked food and everything. Some of the food got messed up in transport and she did something similar. It still made me smile and think how much I love her. So yes, it’s a trope, but it’s a good one, IMO, cause it happens and people can relate.

I'm worried what the system is going to do today. Hopefully it won't mess up the day now than it did earlier

In the next chapter, while in the theater, the system still not showing up for the rest of the chapter, lol

Vilainess System, the greatest yuri wingman

really good news if it doesn't... it really is the greatest yuri wingman for this story