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Solaris1
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So, the ending is a bit ambiguous, but did Ana just fall for someone whom she initially mistook for a romantic rival, but who actually had feelings for her all along, while Kyoko has never noticed a darn thing?

That's the impression I got, but also agree it's too ambiguous to tell.

Too ambiguous. I like open endings but not this wide open.

Solaris1
Please discussion 30 Jan 07:54
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I didn't come back but it was part of my featured novels. I'm glad I clicked on this even with the new tags cause I think of this story A LOT. I normally don't click on angst, depressing, or tragedy tags but I wanted to see where this went. I knew this story the moment I saw the bathtub scene and decided to reread this. Reading this again after 5 years made me realize this story was even sadder than the first time I read it. I originally thought that the promise to meet at the beach was true only to realize it was part of her dream. Along with a few other things but I need to sort them out first along with my feelings because I can't put them into words.

Solaris1
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Okay, so... is the snake the tongue slipping in or something "slipping out"?

Solaris1
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I've always thought about it but in Ch.6, do you think Meguru knew the MC liked her b/c she went through the same thing w/ her sister? Like the looking back only to make eye contact and turn around fast but your face turns red?

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At this point they might as well make it a How to Keep a Triangle but a few years down the line to keep it legal

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Wow... I feel as if I haven't read anything with this much drama and gayness in a good while.

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Oooooooohhhh time travel????

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Great story so far and really good characters, too. I'm excited for more updates. The only downside is that there's been three other girls who look similar to the antagonist and it has confused me a few times

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Dating? I never would've known. Super glad she said it and it doesn't because a "misunderstanding" in the next chapter.

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Aw. I wanted to see a little skip of Yoroizuka at work with the hickies.

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No!! That wasnt an ending for me, just another cliffhanger! At least give me an epilogue!

last edited at Jun 27, 2023 2:53PM

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Cute. Wholesome. Happy.

Solaris1
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That was good. I like it when the title fits the one-shot so well

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Whoa. She good-looking, too.

last edited at May 7, 2023 3:42PM

Solaris1
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At this point, the mom might as well just date her. She can figure out her feelings after

last edited at Apr 25, 2023 6:58AM

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I want to see what's making the noise.

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Wow! Hitomi looks just like her dad!

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No!
Not girlfriend BUT ✨️ wife ✨️.

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Bro....she's only at least eleven. Maybe twelve.

But she is already a major top material.

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Bro. She's a better lesbian than me. Unlike a useless lesbian like me, she unintentionally scored a drink with a pretty girl.

Solaris1
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Couple goals. I wanna grow old like them with a wife.

Solaris1
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I mean... it had a somewhat happy ending.

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We need a Chapter 3&4 asap.

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I swear. The first time I saw her I thought she's either Elsa or her mom. I still do and the feeling is only getting stronger.

last edited at Nov 1, 2022 12:29PM

Solaris1
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End of chapter 18*
Even if you can't tell her, tell us! I wanna know!