i have never particularly been a fan of the manga trend toward overly-long, overly-descriptive, on-the-nose manga titles (“A Story About These Characters, What’s Going to Happen to Them and How It’s Going to Turn Out!!”), and this series is a good example of why not.
That mixer was always a bit of a fakeout anyway, and at this point it’s so far in the thematic rearview mirror that we had to be reminded that it ever even happened by a side-character callback. My point being that any title for this one that doesn’t communicate “lovey-dovey domestic bliss” is so outdated as to constitute false advertising.
i think at least half of it comes from how most of these stories start out as oneshots. And for those the title makes perfect sense, it says right on the tin what you're getting into. But then when a story like that gets picked up for a serialization they keep the name bc it's the same work/to make sure it's recognized as related thus creating said issue
You're quite right about that. I recall reading the first chapters and thinking it would be at most a one-to-maybe-three chapter series. I wouldn't say that this has been notably inventive in its storytelling, but the characters are so charming I don't mind if they keep fluffing it up indefinitely.
Haha, the mcs were retconned quite extensively, weren't they? Especially Natsuko! Looking at them before and now, it's kind of like comparing the beginnings of Virgins' Empire and the present state of things.
I laughed a lot at the chapter where Rika recalls their first meeting and she... well, she basically tells Natsuko: "Hey, rereading the first chapters, you were a total Casanova, huh? A master womanizer! It didn't even take you an hour to throw me on a bed and bang me! Gee, I wonder how many hundreds of girls you have seduced before me?"
Then a panicky Natsuko, after denying that she ever was a player, explains the terms of the retcon to both Rika and the readers. According to this new version of the story, she just looked cool in the first chapters because she was desperately trying to hide her nervousness and incompetence -- and it was pure dumb luck that she did a great job of it! The new canon is that she was a goofball from day one!
Personally I don't mind at all the retcon -- as I like how the manga is slowly turning into something like a second A Room for Two -- but I nevertheless find it worth a chuckle that the author felt the need to write a whole chapter just to justify herself. Hee.