I don't think there's any emotion pulling at all here. There's no way you can look at this page and take it seriously, right? It would defeat literally the entire point of the story if after 50 chapters the conclusion to their romance arc was "Elsa drugs Evie". I'd wager this is either setting up an internal dilemma for Elsa, or Hijinks™.
I'm saying that, either perfume or a potion, and whatever comes next, it being a cliffhanger creates a bunch of unnessesery tension. Tho, a small-ish amount in this case. Doesn't matter if it has 50 chapters of momentum. Authors can stuff up at any time.
I'm having a hard time thinking of any dilemmas. All of them I can think of so far involve contemplating drugging Evie, and weighing it against not doing so. That in itself sends off red flags. There should be no dilemma, only commitment and resolution.
BDSM Hijinks? On principle the risks are too high. You do not put that on someone. Hijinks by drugging other people around Evie? Similar problems to just drugging her.
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