I'm on board with this polycule action for now; the polyamorous quintet is sweet in theory, I like the ambiguous gender presentations... I just hope the story hides some new ideas or collapses interestingly. This is aimless, the angst is weak, and the scenario so far is more contrived than a toast-collision meet-cute. It feels much like an author-insert story or an early work that shows where a creator's focus is.
So far: Everyone comes from the same orphanage, four have been adopted, and it was somehow a mistake for the rich girl to be there in the first place. The five all love one-another deeply, as family, and maybe romantically. When Mokuba went berserk in a science experiment the other four arrived, and they were all allowed to get supernatural abilities too just to be similar. They feel uncomfortable when apart, and are more likely to become berserk when apart. They get a special classroom to stay together in school because money, so it seems the government isn't too involved. Mana went berserk just from being called out by someone outside the polycule so they're all probably sensitive.
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