What a waste of money.. After all she used her body and then she just throw it? Like she doesn't mind that she slept with all those ppl?

What a waste of money.. After all she used her body and then she just throw it? Like she doesn't mind that she slept with all those ppl?

She does mind thats exactly why she can't use that money.

It makes sense as a symbolic gesture of cleansing herself from that past. It was a good story, like all Amano Shuninta works, but the "romance" happened rather abruptly...

It makes sense as a symbolic gesture of cleansing herself from that past. It was a good story, like all Amano Shuninta works, but the "romance" happened rather abruptly...

As soon as I saw what she did and the title of the manga I knew she was gonna throw the money she made, it's so cliche and it annoyed me slightly.

Anyone who worked and wasn't really enjoying their job would surely keep the money because in the end the money was the only thing positive that happened.

I knew where this was going from page 2, the romance happened a bit too fast and I really don't like Amano's art. Still, all the bitching aside, it was a nice oneshot. Thanks Lili.

I suggest removing the Het tag. Up to the staff of course.

throwing the money made total sense to me. using that money would remind her of those times. also i agree with Troid. almost made me avoid reading this then i saw the artist name and went for it. a good read indeed.

so people could collect them

Like they do in the story? You realize that bridge is crossing a street, not a river, right?

argh I'm so angry with this fictional character it's hilarious, but seriously if I saw someone do that in real life I would punch them in the face

That's a sane reaction alright.

She could have use the money to buy other stuff and not use it for her dates. Just a thought.

It makes sense as a symbolic gesture of cleansing herself from that past. It was a good story, like all Amano Shuninta works, but the "romance" happened rather abruptly...

I agree the romance felt really rushed. I don't get why there was a Het tag, I guess because her other clients were guys? It was still a nice read, kind of cliche but different

I love this artist/writer's work and usually it is pretty sound. Both the art and the story felt as if a dead line was looming. If that was the case, it was still amazing to pull it off at all. Though, usually Amano has a vaguely believable premise, so I was slightly disappointed with this one. Can't get it right every time. However, it's still lovely to get to read new yuri.

Anyone who worked and wasn't really enjoying their job would surely keep the money because in the end the money was the only thing positive that happened.

The thing is, she doesn't even see the money as something positive. She did enjokosai not for the money but just for sleeping around with no strings attached

I suggest removing the Het tag. Up to the staff of course.

Sorry about that, I wasn't sure if it was supposed to function as a warning (like on fanfic) or a general descriptor. I won't put it on similar projects in the future.

I suggest removing the Het tag. Up to the staff of course.

Sorry about that, I wasn't sure if it was supposed to function as a warning (like on fanfic) or a general descriptor.

I know that chapter 4 of BA was tagged "Het" by someone other than me for the principal's groping, but I haven't contested it. As a warning of potentially objectionable content, I think it's appropriate, even though it's not an accurate indicator of the work as a whole. (Then again, since it's only a single chapter of a larger work, that probably comes across better than it would with a one-shot.)

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"she's kinda cute" is a right thing to start with :3
and the "how can i take money to sleep with the girl i love" part was the best
thanks everybody for the work. it was tasty :D

It feels so much better to make love than to just have sex..

shuninta is a genius, i can't wait for more chapters of the last book

Okay, yeah, I do feel pretty negative about just throwing money off a bridge like that (if you just want to get rid of it, why not to a charity or something) but the crowd's reaction was pretty hilarious. "Holy crap!", "It's raining money!", etc. I think the plotline/subject matter as a whole could have been handled better but overall it's still a nice yuri work. Thanks to Lililicious for the trans/scans and respect to Shuninta-sensei.

I could actually see this being a multi chapter story. The characters couldve been fleshed out more if that were the case. However, still, a nice oneshot, even though the "I love you" was...too...fast? Out of nowhere? Predictable? Iunno.

see how the yuri saves people's life?

page 20 is priceless, getting clunk in the head while being confessed to.

page 26-27 gave me a heartache, even though its a manga, seeing money being thrown away always put a hole in my heart, I understand it all apart of the symbolism. But the author should have drawn me in the oneshot at the bottom catching some. :'((

see how the yuri saves people's life?

+1 :D AHAHA. rofl.

I suggest removing the Het tag. Up to the staff of course.

Sorry about that, I wasn't sure if it was supposed to function as a warning (like on fanfic) or a general descriptor.

I know that chapter 4 of BA was tagged "Het" by someone other than me for the principal's groping, but I haven't contested it. As a warning of potentially objectionable content, I think it's appropriate, even though it's not an accurate indicator of the work as a whole. (Then again, since it's only a single chapter of a larger work, that probably comes across better than it would with a one-shot.)

BA?

BA - Battle Athletes

It only takes 5 minutes to make me cry.
Congratulation, Shuninta sensei, you did it!

rolls on the ground trying to stop crying