Haven't seen Aoko's work in quite some time

Ah, the rarely found combo of wholesome with NSFW and a goody side of sex.

Always a treat.

That dialogue felt very stilted, like it was translated via Google. I had such a hard time attempting to understand the dialogue I still didn't fully get the flashback...
Still, good to see more Aoko

That dialogue felt very stilted, like it was translated via Google. I had such a hard time attempting to understand the dialogue I still didn't fully get the flashback...
Still, good to see more Aoko

My brain hurt so much from the flash back part. It confused me, not sure if its because of the dialogue or because of the translation.

last edited at Jun 26, 2020 11:32PM

Love the art!

That dialogue felt very stilted, like it was translated via Google. I had such a hard time attempting to understand the dialogue I still didn't fully get the flashback...
Still, good to see more Aoko

My mind hurt so much from the flash back part. It confused me, not sure if its because of the dialogue or because of the translation.

After 12 pages I started pretending it had the "no text" tag.

That dialogue felt very stilted, like it was translated via Google. I had such a hard time attempting to understand the dialogue I still didn't fully get the flashback...
Still, good to see more Aoko

Yeah, it felt like a Google Translation with how literally it was translated. Either that or the translator must not have been a native English speaker, because so much of the sentence structure used here doesn't make any sense in English.

Still, it's probably better than nothing, and I at least appreciate that someone took the time to produce a translation and typeset everything.

last edited at Jun 26, 2020 9:20PM

I’m kinda confused. If anyone understands what’s up with the old friend and stuff please explain.

Well well

The in media res works for some pieces but I feel that it kind of falls flat here.

Well this is next level bad translation wise, to a point where you can't even understand the story.
I'll never understand why someone would want to translate something from a language they clearly can't understand to one they don't master enough to formulate sentences that make sense.

We need better standards than "This is better than nothing"; seeing pictures is nice, but it ruins the story to have text pulled from Google translate pasted in each bubble without any correction whatsoever. I'd rather read the original at this point.

Awful translation.

Well Idk but it was kinda cute I guess

ok real serious question here: do people actually keep their glasses on during sex??

Please, someone who understood, help me understand what the hell is this story's plot, because the translation is god-tier bad.

ok real serious question here: do people actually keep their glasses on during sex??

Seriously, I need the answer to this question too.

ok real serious question here: do people actually keep their glasses on during sex??

No, or I hope not.

Please, someone who understood, help me understand what the hell is this story's plot, because the translation is god-tier bad.

The author is Aoko

Who the fuck uses gooey in hentai in 2020?? Since I'm not a native english speaker I legit had to google what the fuck did it mean. Plot is unclear because of this awful translation

Aoko uses a strange japanese, but still the translation is terrible...

I just want to say it's impressive there are so many different sex sfx. The dialogue was so stilted it was hard to tell if that was a fault of the translation or original dialogue.

I rather read Japanese than questioning the whole story.

Depiction of sex is hot. For me: hot=good. I was confused with the translated dialogue though. Wanna see more of Aoko-sensei's work.

I gave up 10 pages in when nothing made sense due to the atrocious translation

As bad as the translation is, it kind of matches the original in terms of quality (one font for everything, weirdly off-center bubble text, not to mention the "hotel" sign of page 7).