well, that WAS quite a storm.

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Now, that's one way to start a manga. Wonder how it'll go from here.

Ehhhh the short hair girl is a douchebag. Not feeling this so far.

lmao this story like went right to the end on the first chapter

Neither of these characters are terribly interesting or likable and this is really paced like a oneshot.

What an first chapter looking up to the next chapters

I have no idea where they're going with this.

poor fiance-kun

Yeah, that ... was a thing ... that happened ... I guess.

This is definitely something else. I'll be waiting for updates.

whats gonna happen next? tune in to find out!

Yeah wow. This was really choppy, big jumps, awkward transitions, and little substance.

"I'll be taking your bride."

Son of a...

just like that ??
i hope it doesn't end so bad,,,

I share same feelings with everyone. It was awkward af. Like, what are their problems? ._.

Won't pick it up again. Sorry.

Bang. Now I hate walls of infodump monologue just as much as anyone but I don't like whiplash injuries either.

Reminds me of the ending of “the bachelor” with Dustin Hoffman in it. This time it’s yuri. Meh.

I think a couple more chapters released to give a good introduction to story would be better because right now the characters don’t seem interesting... it looks doomed to fail.

If only this can happen in real life........

Seems like author really wanted to start series with "stealing from the altar" scene, but also recognized that if they won't properly introduce characters before it, it won't work, hence the ultra rushed first chapter. I think the general premise is interesting and having useless lesbian actually having guts to go and steal girl during wedding isn't something we see very often, which I compliment, but I agree that execution is pretty messy. I'm willing to give author benefit of the doubt and see what they're going to do now first.

Neither of these characters are terribly interesting or likable and this is really paced like a oneshot.

Kinda agree. I like her stealing her at the alter - but I dont like either of their personalities.

I will have to check out a few more chapters first I guess.

Neither of these characters are terribly interesting or likable and this is really paced like a oneshot.

Kinda agree. I like her stealing her at the alter - but I dont like either of their personalities.

I will have to check out a few more chapters first I guess.

My hope is that the author just really wanted to get to the runaway bride scene ASAP and subsequent chapters are actually going to have like reasonable pacing and more thorough development of what the hell is even happening.

I dont know ANYONE, who married through an arranged or "gold digger/reputation" marriage, so I just cant relate to it, why you should do it. Whats the percentage in Japan for "no love" marriages btw?

Seems like author really wanted to start series with "stealing from the altar" scene, but also recognized that if they won't properly introduce characters before it, it won't work, hence the ultra rushed first chapter. I think the general premise is interesting and having useless lesbian actually having guts to go and steal girl during wedding isn't something we see very often, which I compliment, but I agree that execution is pretty messy. I'm willing to give author benefit of the doubt and see what they're going to do now first.

yeah, I agree.
it's a nice idea, but it was too rushed to care about any of the characters or get to know them.

This is such a refreshing read by such a great author! Looking forward to the coming chapters

This is pretty standard chapter 1 stuff, nothing too out of the ordinary. The story is set up, everything has been laid out, and there's just the right amount of ennui.

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...and there's just the right amount of ennui.

The right amount of tediousness and boredom?!