What bothers me the most is how Hana is portrayed. From the easy going, playful and manipulatrice girl, to a harmless little girl? That's weird. That doesn't match and worse, this is extremely infantilizing. As if she wasn't responsible for her actions, and she was only acting that way because of how she was treated before. Even with a longer development, I'm not sure I would have accepted that. The girl is 35, not a teenager anymore.
Yeah, feeling like that too. A weird character where I almost never saw a compelling expression on her face. There's not enough in the narrative to get me close to understanding her, even with the main character spelling out what she thinks of her. "She's like a newborn" oh huh? She is? Leaves me feeling like that. Maybe it's realistic, like the frustration when a friend is dating someone and you can't wrap your head around why lmao. But I don't know if that was the intent.
Ultimately I either wanted more of Hana's inner thoughts, or maybe remove it entirely and leave her up to interpretation. Cause what we got added up oddly for me.