:3

"To be continued". "Chapter 1". Praise Madoka.

Dat was pretty cute.

Yes! Adult life! This is what I need!

Just so you remember battle underwear is only one step in getting ready. You need battle music as well. This one is a classic. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kln605W1r3E

I like it. :3 us adults can be neurotic and cute too. Both characters are likeable enough altho the senpai is a bit of a mystery.

adult yuri.. ADULT YURI!! PRAISE THE GODS this is what we needed. a SERIES at that. PLEASE THANK YOU LORD

I'm SO!! Excited for this! Really solid first chapter- cute characters and adult life! yuri!!

This looks very promising. I can't wait for more.

Yes! Adult life! This is what I need!

Just so you remember battle underwear is only one step in getting ready. You need battle music as well. This one is a classic. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kln605W1r3E

Battle underwear and battle music - how to charm a girl 101.

GeneralJ posted:

Lmao, another character that is to gay to function, I love it.

And I love it!!! 100%

This first chapter was nice, it's great to have a new adult yuri manga with an already established couple.

@Seira: Didn't expect to see Rinka here. Fatal Twelve is such a great yuri VN, more people should play it.

For some reason I ended up reading that as "want to take a bath together?" lol

Oh? Very nice art.

Eh, it feels kind of weird. A sempai she'd had feelings for randomly wants to go out AFTER they've graduated college and been apart... Suddenly they're living together without any kind of physically relationship, probably not even a kiss. It just doesn't make any sense. Too much of it is skipped.

Then the focus is randomly on "battle underwear" having skipped any kind of relationship or character development. That's not how you do a good story.

Oh snap a new artist and story... It's a good day. XD
Plus the world cup. Yay Mexico going on to the knockout rounds. And a congratulations to South Korea who was able to win their last game in the cup.

Eh, it feels kind of weird. A sempai she'd had feelings for randomly wants to go out AFTER they've graduated college and been apart... Suddenly they're living together without any kind of physically relationship, probably not even a kiss. It just doesn't make any sense. Too much of it is skipped.

Then the focus is randomly on "battle underwear" having skipped any kind of relationship or character development. That's not how you do a good story.

True. Maybe this was more of a One-Shot to see how people would react to it.
And they said screw it let's just go for it and made the story like this.
We don't really know.

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Eh, it feels kind of weird. A sempai she'd had feelings for randomly wants to go out AFTER they've graduated college and been apart... Suddenly they're living together without any kind of physically relationship, probably not even a kiss. It just doesn't make any sense. Too much of it is skipped.

Then the focus is randomly on "battle underwear" having skipped any kind of relationship or character development. That's not how you do a good story.

I agree. I felt pretty confused reading this. I think this might be a story that's more focused on the comedic events of each chapter, like "battle underwear" and the protag's silly fantasies for this chapter, but even if this is just going to be heavy on the comedy and light on the character development, I feel like there isn't even really enough of a base to either of these characters. Like, who are they? Why do they care about each other? What made the senpai want to suddenly go out with the main girl? I feel like these things should be addressed a bit more, even if the manga isn't going to explicitly focus on these things and just use them as a vehicle for the comedy.

badnat posted:

Eh, it feels kind of weird. A sempai she'd had feelings for randomly wants to go out AFTER they've graduated college and been apart... Suddenly they're living together without any kind of physically relationship, probably not even a kiss. It just doesn't make any sense. Too much of it is skipped.

Then the focus is randomly on "battle underwear" having skipped any kind of relationship or character development. That's not how you do a good story.

They say that thing scalated over time, not that they met again one day and started living together the next one... It's fine, the mangaka just wanted to start from the point where they try to live together, and they can go back to those details later... Is it weird to live together when they haven't even kissed? maybe and that's why Miyo says "Isn't that a little soon?" so yeah, the story itself recognizes that this is a strange development but not impossible... And that Miyo wants to kiss and do more stuff but doesn't know how because senpai is... A little... Strange.

So this is a perfect example of comedy, two people throw in an awkward situation... If you wanted a more serious take, try with drama.

PS: First chapters don't give ALL the details ... NEVER

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Yes, I kind of expect that these seeming plot holes will be stuffed with yuri goodness as the series continues. Assuming it's a longer series. There'll probably be an explanation why sempai asked her out etc at some point. This first chapter just teases at things.

Unless it's a short series, in which case the author probably just wanted to get to the meat of things.

Not saying that there isn't any point in criticizing it; if you prefer more linear storytelling that's perfectly valid criticism. But I'd wait a little to see what's going on here exactly.

Eh, it feels kind of weird. A sempai she'd had feelings for randomly wants to go out AFTER they've graduated college and been apart... Suddenly they're living together without any kind of physically relationship, probably not even a kiss. It just doesn't make any sense. Too much of it is skipped.

Then the focus is randomly on "battle underwear" having skipped any kind of relationship or character development. That's not how you do a good story.

The story I think focuses on their life now as adults and a couple, not how the became a couple. I take it that the one character held in her feelings and for one reason or another a distance was created after graduation which isn’t uncommon. The senpai may have loved her before the separation or realized she loved her while apart and decided to make contact. The senpai is shown wearing a different collared shirt when she gives her the key, so that happened after the confession. I think the younger woman is just expressing that everything happened really fast. As for intimacy, all relationships take their own pace.

It's an odd set up, two characters living together, with very blurred lines on whether they're actually dating or not

I think a better set up would've been the whole senpai-kohai past and the senpai responds to an ad to idk be a tenant in the same flat, something along those lines. Then you can still have the awkward "is this flirting? Is it not??" Without it being weird, as it's kind of odd to be this platonic after asking a girl out

I still find the MC super adorbs though so I will totally keep reading, hoping as it unfolds it'll make more sense

It's an odd set up, two characters living together, with very blurred lines on whether they're actually dating or not

I think a better set up would've been the whole senpai-kohai past and the senpai responds to an ad to idk be a tenant in the same flat, something along those lines. Then you can still have the awkward "is this flirting? Is it not??" Without it being weird, as it's kind of odd to be this platonic after asking a girl out

I still find the MC super adorbs though so I will totally keep reading, hoping as it unfolds it'll make more sense

Senpai asked her kohai out, kohai accepted. Then again, we haven’t seen them hold hands, so they’re probably just friends.

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Where do I pre-order this

Who do I have to become a slave for at Seven Seas to get this published in the US

How much will it cost to have 100 chapters of this

So she asked her out, and then they just started living together immediately afterwards. But judging by he reactions to the underwear, have they just not even fucked yet? I'm not usually one to judge, but if you're living with your girlfriend before you've even had sex, then you've probably moved in together too soon.

there's smthn off with this senpai n it makes me really uncomfortable in a good way lol
I love a char like her, can't wait to read the next chap