Delicious. Too bad it seems not to have gotten through Ploy's thick head. Some spanking may be in order, I daresay.

Ploy is a Grade A bitch but then again Donut is also at fault for not speaking up and telling her to go f*** herself.
I don't need my yuri to always be fluffy and happy, but this just feels like forced angst. Hope they won't drag this out too long and Ploy will either change or be removed from the story soon. Ugh I'm getting flashbacks from that chick in Citrus.

I like how you say "that chick" in Citrus, like there aren't like 17 chicks exactly like that in Citrus.

I'm enjoying this series but I'm never a fan of jealousy subplots. ;;

Yeah I couldn't remember her actual name, it's been a while since the last chapter of Citrus was released ;)
I meant Matsuri but now that you mention it... She's not the only one with serious issues in Citrus lol.

I'm not a fan either of jealousyand it makes me want to roll my eyes when characters get kissed and later claim it happened too fast and they couldn't stop it. Yeah riiiight. XD
IMO, Mew could have stopped Ploy from kissing her. Because even if Mew didn't initiate the kiss, she still let it happen and so she did cheat on poor Donut :(

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well I'm talking about event from chapters 25 & 26 so you won't read them until you buy a volume xD

I see, would love to buy one, but I can't read Thai ><. Maybe I'll get a copy if Ratana releases the english version xD

it will be English version in volume. Works are in progress :D

Kurokanako posted:

I'm not a fan either of jealousyand it makes me want to roll my eyes when characters get kissed and later claim it happened too fast and they couldn't stop it. Yeah riiiight. XD
IMO, Mew could have stopped Ploy from kissing her. Because even if Mew didn't initiate the kiss, she still let it happen and so she did cheat on poor Donut :(

There is such a thing as being too shocked to react quickly. It's pretty obvious she actually didn't want the kiss and was getting tired of P'loy's crap so it's really not cheating.

it will be English version in volume. Works are in progress :D

Sweet, will be waiting patiently for that :3

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I can't get past how evil they made that guy look...

I can't get past how evil they made that guy look...

So true. He looks like the devil incarnate, such a contrast from the regular art style. Anyway, Ploy is just as big of a bitch as I thought she'd be so far. brb going to go bang my ex one more time and try to break up her relationship lolol

...Okay, I could maybe deal with manipulative ex interfering with the new couple and whatever, happens all the time in this kind of story, can be done well, etc. But holy shit, girl, you're freeloading at your ex's, who you cheated on, putting them at risk from the dangerous stalker who's driven you out of your home, and there is literally no one else in the entire city who would give enough of a shit about you to grant you refuge. This is a seriously delicate situation. So, naturally, you decide to get so aggressive and gropey that she walks out of her own apartment, openly talk shit about her new girl, and make weird and judgemental demands about their living space and eating habits? What?

Just, like... Is this even a person? At what point do I call bullshit on the writer for inventing this obvious caricature? I know there are real people who would pull shit like this, but she's so pathetically guileless about it that I don't understand how any other character, even the gullible bundle of innocence that is Donut, could take her seriously. Like, you can't get away with being this toxic and manipulative without being WAY better at it than this. Just... P'Mew dated this person? And was serious about her? This girl? Really? Gah.

I agree with both your points and your attitude. Unlikable flat characters being given a pass for dramatic plot reasons gives me an eye twitch.

it will be English version in volume. Works are in progress :D

Sweet, will be waiting patiently for that :3

Same here!! :D

we live in a society that isn't willing to accept homosexuality

uh, so is it acceptable that your boyfriend is stalking you and wants to murder you? Not demonizing heterosexuals but I hate Ploys logic. She has no right to talk down to donut.

we live in a society that isn't willing to accept homosexuality

uh, so is it acceptable that your boyfriend is stalking you and wants to murder you? Not demonizing heterosexuals but I hate Ploys logic. She has no right to talk down to donut.

Naw man, she just means that you gotta be tough to be in a same-sex relationship. You gotta need it, even if it means throwing everything else away. You gotta have the conviction, the determination, the rock-solid grounding in the very core of your being that oh wait she's wandered off and started making out with that random low-level gang member how did she even find one that fast

What's this Ploy trying to ploy?!

thiiiiisssss motherfucker.... oooOooHOHOHOHO Ploy grinnnDS MY gears

thiiiiisssss motherfucker.... oooOooHOHOHOHO Ploy grinnnDS MY gears

I think she would want you to grind her crotch first :P

I had to re-read these two chapters . I was excited (teehee) . My four pit bulls are looking at me crazy while I dance and read <3

My four pit bulls are looking at me crazy while I dance and read <3

!!! Four pits!!?? That's quite the pack you have there!

So it'll be not just a love triangle but a love square? Now that's interesting.

More like everyone likes donuts xD

My poor Mew :( editing these chapters was very painful knowing future events. Especially when Mew said to Ploy "I know full well what it's like to be backstabbed by someone who I thought I trusted." and what Donut did later...because of misunderstanding...

On the other hand I can understand why Donut is unsettled. Ploy looks better suited for Mew and they look awfully close. Donut feels like the third wheel. I don't think she will go as far as having sex with someone else though.

Two chapters release in a row? Great! Oh, that Ploy and her ploys, argh...

Delicious. Too bad it seems not to have gotten through Ploy's thick head. Some spanking may be in order, I daresay.

I bet Ploy would like that.

Omg...The crazy boy O.o I think Ploy is realy in danger now..
There was cute moments in this two chapters ^-^

I CLEARLY didn't see that Mew was AGAINST the seduction of Ploy... Despite telling Ploy to stop, she didn't really try to refuse Ploy herself like when she touched her at certain parts and stuff....
The way i see it, Mew would have gone ALL da way if Ploy wasn't a BIATCH who hurt(backstabbing and losing her trust) her anyhow in the past and that means she would have CHEATED on her present lover, no matter how much she loved her PURE, INNOCENT AND ADOOOORBZZ DONUT....!!!! O_O

I really thought this wasn't going to go toooo far in the drama part but.... they're all playing with JEALOUSY, LOVE AND CHEATING!!!!! My YURI HEART'S BREAKING T^T

Pooor poooor Donut who's just sooo INNOCENT AND PUUURE and fell in love for the first time with another WOMAN(i'd say i'm just like Donut. If i EVER fall in love with another woman i wouldn't really mind being in a SERIOUS LEZ relationship no matter if she'd be my first in EVERYTHING.. ! XD SO THAT SEXY BIATCH PLOY SHOULD STOP MAKING FUN OF DONUT FOR BEING WHO SHE IS, THAT MANIPULATIVE BIAAAATCHHHH!!! XD

Almost getting anxious for that guy to show up, though I guess it won't end the way I'd like but...

het harem end incoming

And so, the forced drama continues...

And so, the forced drama continues...

Come on, this isn't FF.

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