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Heimyfr
joined Aug 18, 2015

Holy balls, this got translated fast.

Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

Who wouldn't to go while debating the merits of men in yuri with a purity fag ...

Some nicely crazy ideas here ^^; But the art feels a little ... bland? To me.

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joined Sep 11, 2016

ok now what is this ?

Delinquint%20yuri
joined Sep 14, 2016

I'd say there's nothing wrong with dark stories, but to pull off ntr+including men in yuri you need to be at least as good as Kodama Naoko (even then I almost dropped the author after reading netzusou trap). As in, it can work for a great story that requires such themes, but starting from the decision to include them cannot be a good idea. In this one-shot, the world MC creates is one where a huge amount of women have to go trough some of the most painfull imaginable experiences. In short, I heavily disagree with everything Izusu stands for

Mari%20-%20gf
joined Apr 1, 2015

Wow...

Pee
joined Oct 1, 2014

I came here only to see the comments section, I don't even have the courage to read this considering those tags.
"How so many tags (especially those ones) can fit in one chapter?"

joined Aug 24, 2013

@Risamari: Read it, it's worth it.

Utenaanthy01
joined Aug 4, 2018

I was LMAO reading the discussion in the first pages.

"I keep getting negative comments about my story! What's wrong with dark netorare yuri with scores of men in it???"

I swear, the author must have been reading the threads in this forum, haha.

Yuu
joined Mar 28, 2015

The plot is actually a total mess. It tried to be deep, but ended up confusing.

Pity
joined Jan 11, 2014

I feel sad and turned on at the same time.

Yuuparu%20cuddle
joined Apr 7, 2013

I came here only to see the comments section, I don't even have the courage to read this considering those tags.
"How so many tags (especially those ones) can fit in one chapter?"

By virtue of being sixty-eight pages long and basically being one continuous sex scene for about fifty of them.

"I keep getting negative comments about my story! What's wrong with dark netorare yuri with scores of men in it???"

I swear, the author must have been reading the threads in this forum, haha.

The plot is actually a total mess. It tried to be deep, but ended up confusing.

Ironic, because I feel about the ending the same way about (non-bishonen) men or (poorly-written) NTR in yuri manga; it added nothing to the story

last edited at Sep 2, 2018 5:02PM

Marion Diabolito
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joined Jan 5, 2015

The first page is either a "Take That!!" at Kodama Naoko or she's secretly a co-author.

St1
joined Feb 17, 2013

There was some good ideas and some funny stuff, and some dark serious stuff, but overall, it seemed a bit of a jumble and confusing.

Stardusttelepath8
joined Oct 15, 2014

Probably the best bit of /u/ commentary this side of Yuri Danshi.

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joined Apr 22, 2018

Well it's not like I didn't expect to see this (since I've read this author's other stories and it always ends in a twist and such) it's good

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joined May 1, 2017

I hope Dark Souls 4 is based on this

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joined Jul 17, 2015

what

Gt00pn-odpc
joined Sep 30, 2017

Man. I always try to give authors that are not my cup of tea second chances and read their stories, but this one is just a massive FUCK NO to me. I gave him/her enough chances. Don't care what their next work will be, I'm fucking skipping It.

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joined Apr 2, 2017

Just the title is mesmerizing

Nuku_nuku_13
joined Aug 27, 2013

Those tags! Sounds like my cup of tea... will report after reading!
Animal ears! BDSM Drama Fantasy Lots of sex Maid Mangaka NSFW Orgy School girl Toys Yuri

Edit: That was... different! A logical plot! And endless yuri sex... quite the combination!
The men in the story were background, barely there, what are people complaining about so much? :/

last edited at Sep 3, 2018 12:20AM

Sin%20t%c3%adtulo-min
joined Sep 28, 2011

Man, the witcher 4 looks beyond great

Image
joined Feb 23, 2016

Man this was fabulous! Fucking great xD could see that they used alot of time on this book(・ω・`) i loveeed it!! I like it when authors read the comments and actually make a storyy out of it lol

7056534
joined May 7, 2017

Whenever I read stories I like to read using real voice actors/actresses in my head, for some strange I chose Cristina Vee as the main character, how very fitting it turned out to be, huh, Homura-chan?

On another note, that was amazing, I want a sequence, a game and a live action adaptation if possible please.

Ewe
joined Jan 22, 2017

Hm...this felt too messy. I liked the fourth wall with all these hated yuri tropes, but it got confusing and a bit shallow fast.

Crazy rage sex isn't my thing I guess. °3°

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joined Apr 27, 2014

I liked it, the perfect mix is yuri with no men of course :P some romance and weird sex, why not.

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