Holy balls, this got translated fast.

Who wouldn't to go while debating the merits of men in yuri with a purity fag ...

Some nicely crazy ideas here ^^; But the art feels a little ... bland? To me.

ok now what is this ?

I'd say there's nothing wrong with dark stories, but to pull off ntr+including men in yuri you need to be at least as good as Kodama Naoko (even then I almost dropped the author after reading netzusou trap). As in, it can work for a great story that requires such themes, but starting from the decision to include them cannot be a good idea. In this one-shot, the world MC creates is one where a huge amount of women have to go trough some of the most painfull imaginable experiences. In short, I heavily disagree with everything Izusu stands for

Wow...

I came here only to see the comments section, I don't even have the courage to read this considering those tags.
"How so many tags (especially those ones) can fit in one chapter?"

@Risamari: Read it, it's worth it.

I was LMAO reading the discussion in the first pages.

"I keep getting negative comments about my story! What's wrong with dark netorare yuri with scores of men in it???"

I swear, the author must have been reading the threads in this forum, haha.

The plot is actually a total mess. It tried to be deep, but ended up confusing.

I feel sad and turned on at the same time.

I came here only to see the comments section, I don't even have the courage to read this considering those tags.
"How so many tags (especially those ones) can fit in one chapter?"

By virtue of being sixty-eight pages long and basically being one continuous sex scene for about fifty of them.

"I keep getting negative comments about my story! What's wrong with dark netorare yuri with scores of men in it???"

I swear, the author must have been reading the threads in this forum, haha.

The plot is actually a total mess. It tried to be deep, but ended up confusing.

Ironic, because I feel about the ending the same way about (non-bishonen) men or (poorly-written) NTR in yuri manga; it added nothing to the story

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The first page is either a "Take That!!" at Kodama Naoko or she's secretly a co-author.

There was some good ideas and some funny stuff, and some dark serious stuff, but overall, it seemed a bit of a jumble and confusing.

Probably the best bit of /u/ commentary this side of Yuri Danshi.

Well it's not like I didn't expect to see this (since I've read this author's other stories and it always ends in a twist and such) it's good

I hope Dark Souls 4 is based on this

what

Man. I always try to give authors that are not my cup of tea second chances and read their stories, but this one is just a massive FUCK NO to me. I gave him/her enough chances. Don't care what their next work will be, I'm fucking skipping It.

Just the title is mesmerizing

Those tags! Sounds like my cup of tea... will report after reading!
Animal ears! BDSM Drama Fantasy Lots of sex Maid Mangaka NSFW Orgy School girl Toys Yuri

Edit: That was... different! A logical plot! And endless yuri sex... quite the combination!
The men in the story were background, barely there, what are people complaining about so much? :/

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Man, the witcher 4 looks beyond great

Man this was fabulous! Fucking great xD could see that they used alot of time on this book(・ω・｀) i loveeed it!! I like it when authors read the comments and actually make a storyy out of it lol

Whenever I read stories I like to read using real voice actors/actresses in my head, for some strange I chose Cristina Vee as the main character, how very fitting it turned out to be, huh, Homura-chan?

On another note, that was amazing, I want a sequence, a game and a live action adaptation if possible please.

Hm...this felt too messy. I liked the fourth wall with all these hated yuri tropes, but it got confusing and a bit shallow fast.

Crazy rage sex isn't my thing I guess. °3°

I liked it, the perfect mix is yuri with no men of course :P some romance and weird sex, why not.