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Someroughclipping
joined Aug 28, 2019

Ah finally, a delinquent x Imouto chapter. I need a separate series starring these two. They have a pretty interesting dynamic going on.

Appleseed____deunan__s_landmate_by_deep_design
joined Apr 17, 2018

Ah finally, a delinquent x Imouto chapter. I need a separate series starring these two. They have a pretty interesting dynamic going on.

I love them as well, glad to see I'm not alone, plus her wisdom " you are possessive that's why people leave you"

JohnnyCanuck
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joined Jan 27, 2019

it do be like that

joined Jul 26, 2016

Saori may not be winning prizes for self-awareness anytime soon but her read on Shizuku seems on point.

Minami
joined Jun 25, 2019

Babe, i want to get smashed
But you are already drunk
That's not what i mean ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

bubbleteabird
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joined May 8, 2017

Are the plates okay? I hope they didn't shatter

Firefly Fanatic
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joined Feb 22, 2019

Are the plates okay? I hope they didn't shatter

I was thinking the exact same thing

Madame_Firenze
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joined Jul 17, 2015

I've had sex in a bathroom. It wasn't great. Although maybe having sex in a bathroom at work is the key

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joined Feb 23, 2016

Oh my oh my ~ i think she indeed have developed a kink( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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joined Mar 24, 2015

Wait so we're really gonna pretend that chapter never happened and act like this is fine--Author, what even

I also worry for the plates

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joined Dec 27, 2015

Iori sure has an large sexual appetite. And alcohol seems to make it worse.

Chinatsu%202
joined Jan 27, 2016

Now I'm just hyper aware of every fucked up thing Iori does and can't find comedy in any of it.

Ykn1
joined Dec 20, 2018

Can't resist. :D

cyberninjasio
joined Jan 5, 2020

Definitely coming to a point here where I don’t think Iori has any right to be in a relationship. Period. She’s an alcoholic who doesn’t listen to her partner and thinks the best way to respond to insecurity is violence. At this point, it’s not funny and just makes me feel worse and worse for Minami.

Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

We need more characters like Iori, instead of all those saintly fake people you usually see in fiction.

Also - the way those dishes crash without any consequences should be a strong hint to how visuals in this manga aren't always meant to be taken literally. ^^

windydostuff
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joined Jan 10, 2016

After Iori hitting Minami, every chapter after that one just feels weird to me. Even though yeah this one is sexy and all but it seems like Minami is starting to feel bothered by Iori.

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joined Jul 29, 2017

I know all these lectures about how the author means for us to take the events of the story are kindly meant, but they're totally irrelevant to how readers respond to the story.

There are the kind of stories where all sorts of bad behavior are depicted in a light-hearted way, and where events that would be horrifying in real life are meant to be, and are taken to be, uproariously funny.

There are stories where those exact same things are taken seriously, and where the bad behavior is shown as having real-life consequences, or sometimes even worse outcomes than in reality.

Sometimes extremely talented narrative artists (authors, playwrights, mangaka) can even successfully include both of those effects in the same work (although the only such examples I can think of offhand are highfaluting people like Shakespeare, or James Joyce in Ulysses).

This mangaka, IMO, is not one of those.

Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

I know all these lectures about how the author means for us to take the events of the story are kindly meant, but they're totally irrelevant to how readers respond to the story.

That's rich coming from the guy fighting a Room for Two crusade for the last year. :p

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joined Jul 29, 2017

I know all these lectures about how the author means for us to take the events of the story are kindly meant, but they're totally irrelevant to how readers respond to the story.

That's rich coming from the guy fighting a Room for Two crusade for the last year. :p

That's because I'm taking it the way the author means.

I'm not fighting for the series (it does that on its own); I'm just laughing at idiots.

joined Dec 5, 2019

NIce chapter, I like when these two have their tender moments, Iori is really thirsty.

thanks for translating

Chinatsu%202
joined Jan 27, 2016

I know all these lectures about how the author means for us to take the events of the story are kindly meant, but they're totally irrelevant to how readers respond to the story.

The irony of this coming from someone who routinely argues that authorial intent trumps audience interpretation pretty much every time anyone else isn't jiving with the author's intent is pretty ridiculous. I guess authorial intent only takes priority over interpretations that aren't yours.

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joined Jul 29, 2017

I know all these lectures about how the author means for us to take the events of the story are kindly meant, but they're totally irrelevant to how readers respond to the story.

The irony of this coming from someone who routinely argues that authorial intent trumps audience interpretation pretty much every time anyone else isn't jiving with the author's intent is pretty ridiculous. I guess authorial intent only takes priority over interpretations that aren't yours.

You have so consistently missed any of my points about authorial intention (including this one) that you have fully convinced me that I am unable to make those points comprehensible to you. But I'll try anyway because what the fuck:

It's completely possible for an author to have an intention that doesn't work on readers the way they want it to work. That's quite different from readers making up a new story in their heads and projecting it onto the story on the page.

joined Dec 30, 2018

Nice chapter

Linterdiction
joined Sep 6, 2018

Drunk Iori is really cute.

Yeah, I’m starting to lean on the side that the shit we saw a couple chapters ago was a hard misplay by the author accidentally portraying something completely different than they meant to. IMO it was definitely bad enough to mark my rating of the manga and I think it pulls the tone in a weird, serious/critical direction that makes me slightly uncertain where the boundary is between dark, fucked up moments and more lighthearted slapstick.

This latest chapter (35) could be interpreted as Iori breaking her girlfriend’s boundaries in a pretty serious way, especially by people whose trust in the author and character was broken by a previous chapter, or it could Minami trying to balance her job and professionalism with her girlfriend being cute and horny in her workplace, and coming to a humorous and spicy balance of the two in a way that shows a little example of how being with a partner can make your life flow in unexpected directions.

Really a shame that the author fucked this up so hard and ruined a lot of people’s enjoyment of a work that relies on some small subtleties and knowledge of their relationship for its effect.

Elixhono
joined Apr 28, 2020

Yeah I just ignore that one chapter and just mark it under terrible chapters. Just obviously an author who used to using slapstick and not knowing its potential implication.

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