I feel like this missing some tags
I feel like this missing some pages.
It's not, I checked the originals. I have a few corrections/clarifications, but even after reading the original, I'm still confused.
page 1: "weekends hit you hard"
I don't think she meant in general, just this one.
page 2: "...sounds about right". "which is it"
I think the original is more like "...that's it" "what is?". Like, being accused of robbery gave her the idea of trying it later that day.
page 28: The middle speech bubble's not really wrong, but I think "Because I feel like everybody's surprisingly nice" would be a little clearer.
The bottom one seems wrong to me, I think it's more like "Isn't it normal to only think about today".
The middle bubble coming from the top panel but being placed after the "why" is really confusing. At first, I somehow interpreted it as that scene happening after the robbery, but I guess she's just answering the friend's comment that she's weirdly optimistic in the flashback and then the same logic applies to Uta's question somehow.
I still can't really make sense of Maika's reasoning for why Uta should run away and it's not a translation issue. And if she's gonna play the robber and let Maika stay, why offer to run away in the first place?
last edited at Feb 13, 2025 6:54PM