It's not even an ending lol. For the majority of the chapter, there is plot hooks and developments as if this was just a normal, monthly chapter. The last 3 pages feel like they were hastily stapled on to this chapter to slap a fin on a story that didn't reach any conclusion.
That's exactly what it was. This feels no better than if it had ended last chapter. And they had easy opportunities to try and put a bow on things.
Why not have the teacher just outright reject Mizuki? We know that's where it's going anyway. Mizuki could have left, consoled by her friend. The end. Instead we have this "she technically didn't say no yet," non-ending, as though there's more chapters coming. (The "technically she didn't say no," trope is annoying anyway, so I'm sort of glad that was avoided.)
It's not like we don't know who the main couple is. Then we have the actual kiss, blush and promise of a future for the main couple, which makes it even more silly not to edit in that rejection. Weird all around. Feels like they just changed the last 2-3 pages to end it and washed their hands. Even a time skip would have been better.
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