Innovative.And cute. ;)

this was great, I was so glad to see it won an award of some kind

absolutely looking forward to more from this author, super cute dialogue and art

Needs the Introspective tag. We've basically got the girl's whole life story in the span of a few seconds.

Page 5 has a typo - pkay instead of okay

Cute and fluffy

yeah when she offered to hold hands I knew the punchline was coming, very fun. It does a really good job at setting up the joke being entertaining all the while.

So, how many minutes do you think pass between page 2 and 16 with her staring at the offered bottle, just thinking through all these things.

An hour and a half, I guess

Absolutely darling!!! She took a standard trope and ran with it, making something special.

It's like nichijou

Seeing that the author is a fan of Yuru Yuri makes a lot of sense. This one shot did give me some Yuru Yuri vibes haha. Very cute

Why is showing me another manga?

Yeah, page four and onward are from In The Gardens of Gehenna, which is a manga with an entirely different premise and tone, to say the least.

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I'm guessing something went awry when fixing that typo.

Decent little story now that I can actually read it

If the word "overthinking" were a manga, it would be this one.

I'm not one to speak as I over think a lot, but this poor girl is going to destroy her brain at this rate lmao

Gay Crush Experienceᵀᴹ

Poor kid's entire life is flashing before her eyes at the prospect of an indirect kiss, lol

Extremely charming and delightful, this manga has a real flow and energy to it that kept me engaged the entire way through, which is pretty rare even for a oneshot. Really looking forward to the mangaka's future work.

(And the black-haired girl absolutely knew exactly what she was doing lol.)

her life flashed before her eyes twice in the span of ninety seconds

Who knew taking a sip of water was so hard.

Our MC gonna die from when the time comes for Izuni to ask "Wanna kiss?".

shes gonna overheat

her life flashed before her eyes twice in the span of ninety seconds

She was standing there, looking at the offered bottle, for A MINUTE AND A HALF??