I've read this again and boy, it's so sweet and a lot of moments are realistic and relatable. Lesbian drama at its finest. I want more.

Got a chance to read this finally. Really sweet ending, all things considered. Took her a while but Sei got "there" and with the promise of a brighter future for them.

It's long passed now but I disagree with how a few were interpreting the line about Yoru and the importance that line was attributed over everything else Sei said. She says a lot after that line, after all and that line is a positive one anyway. Aya has grown to be as important to her as Yoru. For Sei that's an significant milestone and an example of the progression of their relationship, not a negative. "Important" also doesn't mean Sei views them both equally romantically at this point.

The rest of Sei's lines further show her recognition of the current depth of their relationship, Sei's commitment to Aya, her understanding of how long it took for her to reach this point, and her understanding of the pains her struggles have caused for Aya up to this point. Then we end on a confident promise for their future.

Both characters achieve major milestones in the chapter that signified their growth together and commitment (Aya's "virginity" and Sei's realizations/"responsibility"). They were, to me, essentially metaphorical marriage vows ("marriage" or "engagement" being purposely mentioned in the chapter) or their way of saying "I love you." Overall, interesting story!

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aya is so hot oml

Although.. I am just starting to read Flowerchild's manga (because of 'A Face You Shouldn't Show'), I find the MC quiteeee disturbing in Chapter 01.
But hey! It's Flowerchild's manga we're talking about.
And that Flowerchild reminds me of Asagi Ryuu sensei (sensei that draws and writes yuri manga in a H style).
But unlike Asagi Ryuu sensei who draws his (I believe Asagi sensei is a man) yuri characters though lewd, but they still show each other pure, passionate love, Flowerchild's yuri manga goes a wholeeeee different direction that is unexpected , not pure, in fact very male gaze-ish (very straightforward), and yet, the story works!

So, I guess this is the turning point for the yuri stories I've been reading so far.
Actually, it's pretty good, the storytelling, and the characters here displayed quiteeee creepy personality yet acceptable range.
Though I have a feeling that Flowerchild's yuri mangas are leaning towards H and probably male-oriented readers than the females.

Speaking of CH01, luckily the development is going towards yuri.
Imagine this sort of scenes have been playing over and over in real life, except that it's fishing: people creates fake female identity through dating app, connects with the other female, tries to chat with them and get them emotionally attached, then finally tries to get them to send money, or worse off, sending fake female selfies and asked them to send back in return, then invite her to a hotel, only to find out that it's man who's behind all of these, trap them inside and bad ending ensued.

Other than that..
I really like the Youchien side-stories.
It's so much fun seeing the kids playing around together, and sensei to take care of them :3

Haven't read a good story for awhile now while crying.
Thank you, Flowerchild san, thank you!
It's a good story.

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