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joined Mar 3, 2022

Is it just me or are the pages out of order?

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joined Mar 3, 2022

I seem to remember a oneshot very similar to Teardrops in that it features a school girl goïng to piano lessons and meeting someone through that, but unlike that story one of them stops coming to the lessons and it’s all angsty. Am I just misremembering Teardrops or does it really exis?

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joined Mar 3, 2022

WHAT

I really enjoyed that but also just WHAT

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joined Mar 3, 2022

Yaoi goggles are ON for this chapter.

YESSS

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joined Mar 3, 2022

Had to go check, interesting to see that this one-shot got another translation. Well, I'm willing to read it again.

Oh thank you I was so confused. I still can’t find the original though, was it removed ro something?

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joined Mar 3, 2022

Good story, feels hard not to read some of the characters through a trans lens though…

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joined Mar 3, 2022

I’M IN LOVE WITH THIS CHAPTER AND SERIES SO GOOD

also my legitimate first reading of the komachi scene was she sent the bug as an assassin but that doesn’t make much sense does it

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I've read it after cheery amnesia, and wow these both are awesome!

I really love the contrast between them, they way they deal with the same issues the such different ways that are true to their characters. It’s even better than either of them individually.

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joined Mar 3, 2022

I love this already. Such a wild first chapter.

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joined Mar 3, 2022

Woah, that’s not what I expected. In many aspects. Very much looking forward to how this is resolved though, it feels like a lot was set up in the chapter (lack of things to do, implication of her disappearing, and of course her getting lost).

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joined Mar 3, 2022

If we assume that the majority of events that take place in the series are the same as the real world, then:

Chapter 35 occurs earliër in the year as (or late in the year before, but we’ll WLOG assume not) Miss Sunflower’s 24th birthday (as it places itself between chapter 34’s Christmas and chapter 37’s high school entrance exams which occur in February), which means it happened in 1995, 2000, 2006, 2017, 2023, 2028, or 2034.

We can rule out the first three as it must have occurred after 2007; this means the series started in 2015, 2021, 2026, or 2032. We can further rule out 2021 as COVID is not present, and 2026 and onward seems unlikely because Matsuri had a flip phone, Yuu has a flip phone, and ticket machines didn’t exist when Miss Sunflower was in grade school. Therefore, if we grant the initial assumption, it seems this series started in late May–early June 2015 and ended in March 2018.

last edited at Mar 14, 2023 5:05PM

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Satsuki's phone got thrown through a window and destroyed, it's not clear what happened to Michiru's. If she had it on her when she got hit by lightning it's probably broken.

I assumed that this scene was supposed to imply that the reason she went outside was because she reälized she didn’t have her phone on her, hence it was likely just in her bag the whole time (and not destroyed)

last edited at Mar 12, 2023 7:02AM

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I love how accurate the tags describe this piece. You can practically read them off one-by-one to understand the story.

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joined Mar 3, 2022

I missed this so much!! It really brightened my day to see it uploaded here :D

Looks like we’re getting some actual character development too, how exciting…

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Getting horny by being molested by a total stranger... Yeah, I don't think the people who meet a molester during their train travel blush this much and phantasm about their molester. At least they could have showed the molester being arrested to enforce that this behavior is really not okay.

I didn’t really read it that way at all — to me the blushing just came across as a response to the terror the main character was experiëncing, and (what I read as) the discomfort, not arousal, of the main character showed well enough that the behaviour is unacceptable.

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God that was a stressful chapter to read. I have to say I didn’t particularly get ecchi vibes just because it was so uncomfortable, but I can see the argument for it.

Also, y'all like this guy?? I'm getting bad vibes from him, like the moment he finds out she's trans she's getting kicked in the stomach. What a terrifying situation.

Not gonna judge yet. I feel like it could go in many directions.

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joined Mar 3, 2022

Amazing that despite the generic premise some stories can still be geniunely really good. Very excited for this.

last edited at Feb 17, 2023 6:12PM

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joined Mar 3, 2022

I dreamt last night that there was an anime of this. I still can’t get over my devastation that I woke up and there just isn’t D;

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joined Mar 3, 2022

Yay, more chapters, and so very gay :D

Also, is it just me or does something feel fishy about the whole setup? I feel like it’s implied there’s more of a backstory than meets the eye, like why Miya suggested she should become a guardian, and other history in general.

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NOOOOO HOW COULD THEY END IT LIKE THAT????

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I love how all the other characters also get transported into the isekai for absolutely no reason at all lmao

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This is painfully relatable in places lol. I love the way in which it’s telling the story though, it feels very grounded.

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She was so horny she brought the entire page into colour. Gotta respect it.

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YuuLily discussion 31 Jan 18:25
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There's plenty of futa on here, but I think this might be the first trans hentai on the site. It's so rare. The other Lily Hoshikawa h-doujins are pretty awful, so I'm surprised we got one at all.

Then it’s a good thing, I guess — I certainly really want to see more of it. It’s just a little unfortunate it’s… this.

last edited at Jan 31, 2023 6:26PM

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joined Mar 3, 2022

I want to read Dynasty comments ONCE without complaints about abuse or toxic relationships.

Okay? Well I don’t. I think it’s valuable for people to share experiënces and I enjoy reading people’s critical responses to and analyses of stories and art. I also acknowledge that not everyone wants to see that, and that’s perfectly fine, but you can just ignore them rather than criticize people for posting them. It’s not inherently harmful so I don’t see why you feel the need to complain about it.