Internally screaming

Externally screaming

Wholeheartedly screaming

Wholesomely screaming

Internally screaming

Externally screaming

Wholeheartedly screaming

Wholesomely screaming

Hand-holding screaming

I just noticed that Evil Yvonne in the dream has the same eyes as Elsa. I wonder if that's supposed to mean something?

It’s also similar to Dahlia’s demon form. Potentially it could, but it could also just be to differentiate the characters and it could go multiple ways anyway.

Yeah they might be the same. The demon nun's look pink or light red to me, while Elsa and Evil Yvonne look dark red, but I'm not actually 100% on that.

I just noticed that Evil Yvonne in the dream has the same eyes as Elsa. I wonder if that's supposed to mean something?

It’s also similar to Dahlia’s demon form. Potentially it could, but it could also just be to differentiate the characters and it could go multiple ways anyway.

Yeah they might be the same. The demon nun's look pink or light red to me, while Elsa and Evil Yvonne look dark red, but I'm not actually 100% on that.

You mighr forget the biggest thing, the eyes trigger only at full moon for the nun whereas it's the natural color of Elsa's eyes. Plus her hair become white, which has never been the case for Elsa.

I shall consider this progress.

I shall consider this progress.

Same

Oh no, it's evil Yvonne, or as we in the business call them, Edgy Evie.

ngl evil Yvonne is kinda hot, I'd like to see an art of 2 Yvonnes sandwiching Elsa

ngl evil Yvonne is kinda hot, I'd like to see an art of 2 Yvonnes sandwiching Elsa

I feel like the internet has had to have done this somewhere for you, no? That seems like a freebie.

I just noticed that Evil Yvonne in the dream has the same eyes as Elsa. I wonder if that's supposed to mean something?

It’s also similar to Dahlia’s demon form. Potentially it could, but it could also just be to differentiate the characters and it could go multiple ways anyway.

Yeah they might be the same. The demon nun's look pink or light red to me, while Elsa and Evil Yvonne look dark red, but I'm not actually 100% on that.

You mighr forget the biggest thing, the eyes trigger only at full moon for the nun whereas it's the natural color of Elsa's eyes. Plus her hair become white, which has never been the case for Elsa.

I'm not really concerned with the nun, I'm concerned with Evil Yvonne having Elsa's eyes.

WAIT A MINUTE IS ELSA WEARING YVONNE'S HAIRCLIPS

Oh no, it's evil Yvonne, or as we in the business call them, Edgy Evie.

Umbreon?

Internally screaming

Externally screaming

Wholeheartedly screaming

Wholesomely screaming

Hand-holding screaming

HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHEGWORHGDNHSJD

So cute. How heart-meltingly sweet. Elsa looked cool when wishing Evie would share the burden. Would Evie explain things a bit before confessing? I think that's the flow.

Predictions:
* This deviation in the plotline was to bring Elsa where she would meet the Demon King or prince or whatever. The demon was somehow connected to Miss Dahlia and was searching for her before or after being injured. In the other timeline(s) Miss Dalia never revealed herself to the demon.
* The Demon King will fall for Evie because comedy.

Less supported predictions from most likely to least supported:
* Demon Yvonne is a mare that regressed with Yvonne into the past, and maybe even a duplicate of the one that deviated from the plot by possessing Elsa and was killed by Evie. Evie couldn't be possessed twice so the mare attacked Elsa. The only reason this high-level mare can't control Evie is the time-leap Elsa blocked or delayed it early on.
* Evie was adopted, that's why Dalia considered her memories incomplete. It's also an excuse for why her style includes apparently-invisible hair clips identical to what Elsa wears, as a "don't forget me" sort of memento.
* Evie is more or less the same as the other Yvonne and lost her memories in the time-leap reincarnation. She got new ones instead to replace the trauma. Because she was possessed by a mare until late in the story, her pride and sensitivity were amped up. Maybe the obsession was attraction warped into hate. So the extreme character truly was Evie but drugged and brainwashed and things got out of hand after meeting Elsa. Elsa figured this out eventually and rescued Yvonne, and Yvonne may have even been rehabilitated, but Yvonne was still executed in at least one timeline.
* Time-leap Elsa is a counterpart to Yvonne's missing memories of her past life, and only present like a guardian angel. Elsa eventually died too, slightly similar to the couple in the original tragic ending to Evie's favorite book. This timeline is more like the happier remake play. So the duplicate Elsa is a spirit who will fade away naturally, which will avoid some of the plot shenanigans of having a time-traveling duplicate. I wouldn't be surprised if this spirit is powered by love or something.

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[A bunch of theories.]

Nice theories. Good to see some thought going into what might be happening.

• Evie was adopted, that's why Dalia considered her memories incomplete.

Certainly came to mind when reading that part, yes.

Ah such a sweet moment

[A bunch of theories.]

Nice theories. Good to see some thought going into what might be happening.

Especially good for someone like me who has no clue what might be happening. Like, at all.
(Alternate evil Yvonne? Alternate sus Elsa? Demon nuns? Huuuh??)

Nice! I too love playing with manga pics to make funny compositions, so I have a soft spot for this kind of humor. Great work, much appreciated! :D

lol evie

evie what the hell lmao

Yvonne: "Don't mind me, just casually checking this child's genitals."

Ok, how old is this novel, actually? In the last years I've only seen female demon kings, and they are always lolis, if anything a male one would be the real surprise, was the last time Evie saw a plot like this before the 2010s?

There are plenty of male demon kings in contemporary shoujo