And while your remark is true it completly misses the point of my original post
I didn't miss the point; I saw no reason to express agreement or disagreement with your main thesis.
But, if you want my opinion, then I'd say that you are right in-so-far as stories should show rather than tell (that is to say that they should convey the story by describing what would be witnessed), but as the story develops, and becomes far less comedic, one way or another it requires more world than if it had just stayed a comedy, so the author has to do more world-building. However, even setting aside how the world is presented to the audience, it is not well constructed.
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