Wonderful. I hope this one gets a sequel

Hey this is kinda cute!!

uhh "lesbian predator" stereotype much?

"and she slept unmolested"

Gold!

This needs 10 more chapters.

moe

"and she slept unmolested"

Gold!

I died

“I have feasted upon countless maidens!”

That line right there fucking broke me.

"Holy crap I would die for her"

You just took a glance I-
Anyways sequel?

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The memorable lines alone make this top tier but I do hope to see more of these two again. Very cute.

uhh "lesbian predator" stereotype much?

Well I don’t know if i misunderstood ur meaning or not but like, making characters on stereotypes is a common thing, and to be fair the other girl who is also a lesbian isn’t a predator so it shows how the author isn’t enforcing the stereotype onto all lesbians.

The ending was kind of underwhelming. It would have been better with a few pages more, for the aftermath.

I want the night action! I WANT THE NIGHT ACTION!

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!

Is it just me or does predator-chan sound a bit tsun at the end? cause it sounds to me like she's really happy that someone's recognized the effort she puts in to look how she does thus tsuns to cover it up.

Hm...A bit too short. Now I want to see the same concept but more fleshed out and with a vampire.

uhh "lesbian predator" stereotype much?

Well I don’t know if i misunderstood ur meaning or not but like, making characters on stereotypes is a common thing, and to be fair the other girl who is also a lesbian isn’t a predator so it shows how the author isn’t enforcing the stereotype onto all lesbians.

Also, there are absolutely lesbians who are also predators just like there are predators of all other sexualities, and the fact that a stereotype exists should not prevent such characters from being allowed to be written at all in fiction.

same concept but more fleshed out and with a vampire.

Ah, a person of culture, I see.

I would love to see a sequel to see how the girl makes more attempts but fail because the other girl is really nice.

Suggestion/request make this into a manga

based predator i want more

She sure is adorable for a predator.

Me when I see literally any dog.

I desperately want to see more of their dynamic/shenanigans. Thank you for this delicious treat.

Dont end there dangit!!!

This is everything. The sequel happens a year later, at their wedding. All Predator-chan's "prey" show up to the ceremony.