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Poor guy, getting strung along

This' got citrus level dubious consent, and overall big citrus vibes, count me in

It's not citrus vibes if the universe isn't dunking on the blondie

I wonder, this is building up to another paranormal confrontation, so is it gonna be Michi or Masaki who does it? I don't think the two usual exorcists are gonna be present this time

Is Michi gonna try to strangle a Bich with that pendulum?

Ignoring the tagging situation from earlier, I do think this would've been received better if it hadn't escalated so quickly. It's a lot to cram into a oneshot and it's not made clear the MC is into it until the very end so I can see why people felt blindsided by the content. I kind of already associated exhibitionism & blackmail with humiliation since they tend to go together but maybe there should be a separate humiliation tag if people feel that strongly about it.

Humiliation can be a fetish, and it can also be a point of extreme discomfort. So a tag would probably be a good idea, as it would help people that enjoy it as a fetish find works with humiliation, and it would help anyone that's made uncomfortable by it avoid those works.

Agreed, a humiliation tag would be great
Yeah

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Did not expect people to get so upset over an exhibitionist sub fantasy considering all of the other stuff that's been uploaded here over the years.

Probably because this one is mean

I sincerely don't get humiliation, everytime I encounter it I just get sad from the plot

Why does Lapis have to let her go?

I assume that she thinks that she doesn't deserve her or that she won't be good for her. Not an uncommon plot element to see in these sorts of stories.

Makes me wonder, has she not realized Natori knows all about her plan? As far as she knows Natori has the gift of foresight after all

Matsuri rubs me the wrong way. Has from the start. The cute, supportive things she says are always undermined by art and typesetting (if you can call it that), turning what would normally be seen as a supportive, uplifting character into a manipulative one.

I think she'll be a highly toxic influence.

nah you tweakin

It would fit, the main reason to reject the idea is that it leaves Wakaba with nothing

No, Wakaba has Komaki. Komaki's troubled and therefore trouble in and of herself. Komaki can't conceive of a world where Wakaba and her could be together, so she's trying to push her away as hard as possible to make Wakaba cut ties with her, because Komaki can't bring herself to do it. Well, Wakaba is naturally awakening to her own feelings for Komaki and things will go the way things go in manga. Matsuri is not a guardian angel.

Komaki is a burden at best and a bully at medium. Wakaba is rather justified in complaining about how unlucky she feels her life is. The story is pretty far from giving any reason Wakaba should want to be with Komaki beyond suspension bridge effect

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Matsuri rubs me the wrong way. Has from the start. The cute, supportive things she says are always undermined by art and typesetting (if you can call it that), turning what would normally be seen as a supportive, uplifting character into a manipulative one.

I think she'll be a highly toxic influence.

nah you tweakin

It would fit, the main reason to reject the idea is that it leaves Wakaba with nothing

I have concluded that i dont want Komaki to be end game. Komakis sorry should end with her getting her shit together... And nothing futher

We weren't thinking big enough, not big enough at all! The anti Miyazaki move!

Lapis doesn't realize that Natori cannot be removed from the story, she is there solely to change history, her history.

Is this the first time we have seen Lapis fully crack?

I'm so glad we saved this manga! It would've been a huge loss if it were to be axed... Thank you all for your work to those who aided in promoting and boosting vol. 1's sales!

its saved? volume 2 was always gonna come out

...Raimu endgame. I don't care if or how the other girls get involved as long as Raimu ends up happy.

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they very much THINK is toxic

what

I don't see the confusion.
They think she was knowingly three-timing them behind each others' backs, which most people will agree is a very bad thing to do and quite toxic. She wasn't, but they think she was, that is their POV of the situation. The entire premise of the plot so far is that she fails to clarify this so disastrously over-the-top that it's supposed to be funny.

they dont really, they arent crazy enough to think what a little girl said 7 years ago is binding or that someone of that age can even be in a serious relationship

Btw, methinks Diana will end up with the Prince, it fits.

mhm i don't see it. Iirc that's how it's originally supposed to go according to the game's story but so far neither of the two have shown romantic interest in the other (or any real interest for that matter) xD Diana has barely started not being hostile towards him

Could all be spun as romantic foreplay, the whole "you two get along so well" -> (in unison)"no we don't!"

Besides that part of the story isn't what natori is interested in changing

Boooo!! Get that het shipping out of my yuri manga!

They got together once already ;)

Her dark baggy eyes brings all the Gals to the yard

Btw, methinks Diana will end up with the Prince, it fits.

mhm i don't see it. Iirc that's how it's originally supposed to go according to the game's story but so far neither of the two have shown romantic interest in the other (or any real interest for that matter) xD Diana has barely started not being hostile towards him

Could all be spun as romantic foreplay, the whole "you two get along so well" -> (in unison)"no we don't!"

Besides that part of the story isn't what natori is interested in changing

The magic in this would look so cool if it was actually focused on more.

Btw, methinks Diana will end up with the Prince, it fits.

Those screwtails are ridiculous and remind me more of Souryu's Machimaho (the magical girl parody where the a yankee is made a magical girl) than I Favor the Villainess or Marimite.

Almost like she's overcompensating

"recommend someone"

Whoop whoop