Just started reading this, and I really like action + yuri! :D
Edit: after reading a little more gahahaha I have to agree with the comments on the anatomy (you know, balloon bewbs) + costume design :') but I guess it doesn't ruin it for me... We need more quality action yuri!!
I've also noticed that some of the dialogue is a little on the nose, just there to hand out info. However, it is the most efficient way of setting up such a complex world, and I can't think of a way to avoid it without dragging out the story too much. I do like some more subtext in my stories doeee
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