bummer

No

I feel like that needed more than 8 pages to work effectively

That's it no more depressing reads for me, I need something fluffy.

The pacing went ZOOM

The pacing went ZOOM

so was the car i guess

-keep cry- ..... :(

I can't

I knew I was going to regret reading that.

;-;

On the verge of tears. And then it ended before I could let a tear drop.

I'm glad I read this first. I'm going to need some cheering up after this one.

I saw the tags and i still read it expecting something different since it was from Canno :(

Gonna have to read Canno's other works to cheer me up now.

Waaah!??

On the verge of tears. And then it ended before I could let a tear drop.

same

how can i hold all these feels!?

The pacing went ZOOM

so was the car i guess

You monster.

Anyhow, I feel that Canno was almost successful at conveying grief over the death of a loved one, but the short length prevented it from having a major impact. A longer format, like in Haru and Midori, is much better suited for this kind of story.

The pacing went ZOOM

so was the car i guess

Please don't make me laugh here

This really hits home. I lost my fiance as well. Damn near same situation too. Right in front of me though. Walking a crosswalk and a car thief ran the red.... I'm gonna go hermit mode for a couple weeks now.... Yay PTSD. Dangit.

The pacing went ZOOM

so was the car i guess

You monster.

Anyhow, I feel that Canno was almost successful at conveying grief over the death of a loved one, but the short length prevented it from having a major impact. A longer format, like in Haru and Midori, is much better suited for this kind of story.

Chapter wise or story wise? Cause of it's a lot of chapters leading up to it he tragedy, then that would be very effective but sad as hell that that was the payoff after all those chapters.
Also, I haven't read it yet and won't thanks to these comments. Yay

The pacing went ZOOM

so was the car i guess

...

Oh. So this is what we're doing? We're taking a trip on the feels train?

Excuse me, Conductor-san, but I'd like to get off at the next stop, please. I have enough sadness dealing with being alone on the holidays, my current feels don't need any more aggressively sad and furiously lonely feels added to the pile, thank you.

The pacing went ZOOM

so was the car i guess

I can’t >_<

The title itself spoiled it.

Why