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Heart-Of-The-Earth
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joined Nov 6, 2013

bummer

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joined Jun 13, 2012

No

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joined Apr 27, 2013

I feel like that needed more than 8 pages to work effectively

Yuriloveisbestlove
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joined Feb 15, 2019

That's it no more depressing reads for me, I need something fluffy.

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joined Sep 29, 2018

The pacing went ZOOM

Sweet Dangus McGee
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joined Jul 2, 2017

The pacing went ZOOM

so was the car i guess

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joined Nov 11, 2018

-keep cry- ..... :(

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joined Jan 17, 2017

I can't

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joined Mar 21, 2019

I knew I was going to regret reading that.

S-l225
joined Feb 14, 2014

;-;

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joined Apr 2, 2013

On the verge of tears. And then it ended before I could let a tear drop.

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joined Sep 1, 2017

I'm glad I read this first. I'm going to need some cheering up after this one.

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joined Oct 15, 2016

I saw the tags and i still read it expecting something different since it was from Canno :(

Gonna have to read Canno's other works to cheer me up now.

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joined Sep 16, 2017

Waaah!??

DR2 Hajime Hinata
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joined Jul 20, 2016

On the verge of tears. And then it ended before I could let a tear drop.

same

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joined Feb 14, 2018

how can i hold all these feels!?

Internet_lied
joined Jul 15, 2016

The pacing went ZOOM

so was the car i guess

You monster.

Anyhow, I feel that Canno was almost successful at conveying grief over the death of a loved one, but the short length prevented it from having a major impact. A longer format, like in Haru and Midori, is much better suited for this kind of story.

joined Jun 30, 2015

The pacing went ZOOM

so was the car i guess

Please don't make me laugh here

joined Apr 1, 2018

This really hits home. I lost my fiance as well. Damn near same situation too. Right in front of me though. Walking a crosswalk and a car thief ran the red.... I'm gonna go hermit mode for a couple weeks now.... Yay PTSD. Dangit.

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joined Aug 19, 2018

The pacing went ZOOM

so was the car i guess

You monster.

Anyhow, I feel that Canno was almost successful at conveying grief over the death of a loved one, but the short length prevented it from having a major impact. A longer format, like in Haru and Midori, is much better suited for this kind of story.

Chapter wise or story wise? Cause of it's a lot of chapters leading up to it he tragedy, then that would be very effective but sad as hell that that was the payoff after all those chapters.
Also, I haven't read it yet and won't thanks to these comments. Yay

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joined Sep 29, 2018

The pacing went ZOOM

so was the car i guess

...

shadesofgreymoon
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joined Jun 5, 2016

Oh. So this is what we're doing? We're taking a trip on the feels train?

Excuse me, Conductor-san, but I'd like to get off at the next stop, please. I have enough sadness dealing with being alone on the holidays, my current feels don't need any more aggressively sad and furiously lonely feels added to the pile, thank you.

joined Nov 28, 2019

The pacing went ZOOM

so was the car i guess

I can’t >_<

Yuu
joined Mar 28, 2015

The title itself spoiled it.

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joined Jan 11, 2019

Why

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