I had the good fortune to not see this series until today, so this months-late comment is directed at Chapter 4 because nobody vocalised the biggest problem for me.
It's not just that she was cheating, it's the complete non-event it was portrayed as which indicates a total lack of regard for gay relationships from the author. This basically felt like another take on "it's okay because they're just playing around before they get serious with a man", and it's absolutely revolting.
If there were any level of gravitas to the situation, it would be different. I loathe cheating, and I'm especially not fond of it being sprung out of nowhere in a hitherto-fluffy story, but I wouldn't say that cheating is so utterly taboo that you're not allowed to write a story about it. But this story isn't about the cheating, it just... happens. I'm left with a feeling that this is written from the perspective of someone who sees FxF relationships as nothing more than jerkoff material for men.
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