I agree that the the pacing is completely off, it's weird how our MC goes from person to person and her feelings change in such extreme ways all to progress things with the next person.
Also in regard to the initial comment in this response chain, a lot of harems do have the MC pick the "right" partner, but I would say all of those series don't understand the point of a harem. It's fine if anyone wants a monogamous relationship in a story but don't call it a harem, if I read/watch a harem series I want it to actually be a true harem. I would agree that 99% of harem protags don't deserve everyone let alone 1, though I think that's a case of the protags needing to be written better more than anything. This is why I want a lesbian harem protag that's along the lines of Rentaro, who goes to absurd rom-com lengths to fulfill the needs of every partner and make sure everyone is happy.
I wish this manga was a true harem, but it's hard to even see her with anyone at this point. I'm hoping that will change though lol
I’d say that the harem problem is not that the MC is poorly written, it’s that the MC is always intentionally written to be as nondescript and devoid of character as possible due to the idea that the MC must function as an audience self-insertion golem before anything else. If the MC has no personality, then (the idea goes) everyone will have an easier time identifying with them. Then you give all of the pizazz to the love interests. It can’t function as a story because the whole thing is a plate-spinning game - snare enough readers’ attention and then keep them interested by teasing their preferred outcome as long as possible.
Personally I think this iteration on the formula is slightly better than most due to the way the author seems to be willing to strike out candidates before the last chapter. Also, Mei has a smidgin of personality, even if it is just “guileless, naive enthusiasm for whoever and whatever is around her.” I guess you can charitably read it is “she just has so much love to give.” :D
Imagine this story with a protagonist with a MC written like, say, Mitsuki from TGSLWAGAA - guitar player who works in a record shop with her cool uncle and speaks fluent English because of her love of Western music. I mean, just that sentence is more character detail than we have on Mei in 40+ chapters. And it gives the love interests something to bounce off of BUT we know that it also eliminates like half of them off the top just by virtue of character. Which of course is why nobody ever bothers to tell a harem story about someone interesting. :)
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