As much as I enjoy this, it's always really difficult to get right in terms of when you get the payoff. Ch 10 would be a good time for the reveal but I think these things have a tendency to drag on longer than they should. I'm predicting some sort of misunderstanding where she thinks there are siblings or something.
there aren’t that many pages in one chapter any way >.>
This is true, but I think it misses the point. It's not so much that the series goes on too long, just that reasonable scenarios get exhausted. Like regardless of the chapter length, the premise only leaves so much room for misunderstanding; it's more about the number of mised opportunities at a resolution and what will become increasingly outlandish ways of avoiding that resolution.
And to be clear, I love this and it could probably go on quite a bit longer and still work, but passing on this chance at a resolution would be kind of worrying to me.
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