Last chapter from the Himitsu, Hitotsu anthology.

Enjoy the "gorgeous" art in this one.... :p

waaaaaah so much cuteness isn't good for my heart!! the characters are beautiful.

This was really fast! I looked twice if I missed the "NSFW/Lots Of Sex/Moderate amount of Sex tag" I thought the story was about something like that because this development was reallyyy fast! But it is cute.

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What a lovely couple, the cutest manga are always the ones with girls already in a relationship.

t-that was it ..?
dang it , what an abrupt ending.. I haven't even cummed yet u know, I feel so sad

Eyes bigger than my future...

damn, i had to check the date when this came out, because the art feels super old. it's like i'm reading something pulled out of the 2000s. not bad, though! very cute all in all

Oh thank god, this one shot is so fluffy I thought they will also end up kissing only for 10 years.

Short, sweet, and above all, no angst/drama. Just how I like it.

That Aoi is like a proto Kase San

Eyes bigger than my future...

That's the first thing I noticed. As soon as the first panel of page 1, I'm like, "What the hell is wrong with this girl's eyes?"

That Aoi is like a proto Kase San

Haha yesss so true

The shy girls eyes though omg, poor thing doesn't have any room left for her face

Well, a bland story at best.

An overall pleasant anthology. good:1-3-4 / meh: 5-6 / bad :2
Thanks for the translation !

Ropponmatsu posted:

Last chapter from the Himitsu, Hitotsu anthology.

Enjoy the "gorgeous" art in this one.... :p

As you say... "gorgeous".

And wtf, that was so... bland?

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I loved this so much good work <3 <3 <3

@lytel & Nya-chan
This one, along with ch5 are listed in the anthology as previously unpublished. I'm guessing they were just stories that hadn't made the cut for publication, but were then included when the previous stories were compiled. Personally, I enjoy chapter 5, though mostly because Sayu is cute. Yes, I'm easy. :p

Imo a good oneshot is one that you'd want to reread some other time. I guess it's kinda cute but this isn't something that I'd want to reread or something so it's not too good imo. It's not bad or anything, just kinda... meh.
Could've been longer to show more of them making out or maybe show an epilogue where one of them kiss the other in front of the boy to show how they should fuck off or something. Not saying short stories are bad (I've seen 4 pagers cuter than this) but it's just felt very lacking.

Very "mainstream" I would say (no offense really). Another unrealistic happy ending adding to the collection, but who I am to reject a happy ending in this world full of breakups xD

How cute

Very shallow story. Has got to be the most generic style I've seen in a few months.

This looks like it was released 14 years ago haha. Feels somewhat nostalgic

That Aoi is like a proto Kase San

Spot on. Overall, cute.

I don't even care if it was flat or shallow, I rather enjoyed the lack of plot-induced drama.