Well, the art isn't the best, HOWEVER, it's still better than most of us could do. I have a feeling the artist will polish her skills over the following chapters, so we can look forward to that. I don't even think the art's bad, it's just that it seems to be lacking something.
This is going to be exactly like Fifty Shades of Grey, but actually good and without penises. So, I guess it's not going to be anything like that book :P. Has anyone actually read the books? I haven't.