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joined Aug 10, 2015

It's pretty interesting, though.Okay i'll have to say - art isn't thaaat great, but in my opinion it's still worth a read...i mean, the plot's kinda interesting...So, i'll have to see how thus will develop.

Utena-240x146
joined Sep 13, 2015

^^
I agree that its pretty interesting. I can't wait to see how it plays out.

Tear
joined Aug 3, 2013

The art isn't that great but the plot is good. I already read this till chapter 12.

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Crystal3
Three Musqueerteers
joined Sep 25, 2013

It's like yaoi but not yaoi.

Utena-240x146
joined Sep 13, 2015

How is it like yaoi when its yuri.

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Meiling%20bun%20150px
joined Jun 28, 2012

Well obviously it's like yaoi, I mean look at all the penises!

Natsuki
joined Feb 5, 2015

Art is not so great but the idea of the story is pretty interesting. Looking forward to see more of it.

123118
joined Jan 31, 2013

I couldn't help myself ... sorry.

Utena-240x146
joined Sep 13, 2015

^
I love how the speech bubble of talk to the hand is covering half her butt. its making me laugh lol.

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joined Apr 4, 2014

15000 for a month?
This is interesting.

Interesting? That's cheap as fuck! Sign me up that's a bargain right there...

Img_0647
joined Nov 25, 2014

YES!!!!!!

Love.live!.600.1492198
joined Sep 4, 2014

Seems very interesting.

Panty%20from%20p.s.w.g
joined Jul 10, 2015

RAWR!!!! NEED MOAR!!! The plot's got me hooked!

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joined Mar 23, 2014

Omg I've been reading this on Ookbee. So glad this got picked up

joined Jan 8, 2014

Interesting premise, very unique...ill be looking forward to the next translation :)

Bunnythor_full_small
joined May 17, 2015

Don't mind the art. See Gunnerkrieg : went from average to awesome.

Er, what?

I agree that football-head Antimony was a bit of a detraction to the early days of Gunnerkrigg Court, but aside from that, you can see that Tom had a well-developed sense of style and was constantly pushing boundaries. Some of the art as early as Chapter 3 is breathtaking. Plus, Tom's writing on Gunnerkrigg has always been exemplary, right out of the gate.

As for this . . . well, let's just say that there is a lot of room for the artist/writer to grow.

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joined Apr 12, 2014

Art is shit but I'll still read :)

Dark_Tzitzimine
Roar%20small
joined Dec 18, 2013

While the art is certainly amateurish, is still pleasant to the eye and the story shows potential. So, i'll kep on eye on it to see how it goes.

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joined May 13, 2014

50 shade of grey?????

Nezchan Moderator
Meiling%20bun%20150px
joined Jun 28, 2012

50 shade of grey?????

God, I hope not.

Gorgeous%20ruka
joined Jan 13, 2014

Is this a trap? welp.

Tfwubestgirl
joined Aug 16, 2015

I'm shocked that the largest complaint is the art. Although it does lack the polish that a published work would have, the actual drawings are done well in my own opinion. The characters are aesthetically pleasing and the expressions seem to fit the situation at hand. The backgrounds and environments are not the best, but this seems to be a one man, low-to-no editing work, so I wouldn't expect much more.

On the other hand the writing is rushed, jumbled, and overall jarring. I would put the art quality high above the writing quality. A confusing plot has been established with a very barren and quick exposition. I'm pretty sure the MC's name was not even mentioned, as well as having barely any other information about her or the setting. The main premise of the story was forced upon us so immediately that we were given almost no reason to care about it in the first place.

That being said, as others have mentioned the only way to get better at this kind of thing is to do it and it seems like this has potential. I'm hoping that the author learns along the way :)

Heimyfr
joined Aug 18, 2015

I remember the Author joining IRC ( The log: http://pastebin.com/Kd8bak7q )
If you look at his previous works here (http://g.e-hentai.org/tag/artist:1st-kuro), you can see he's grown over the last year.

That said, I welcome every new artist.

last edited at Nov 6, 2015 7:53AM

Fennec
joined May 28, 2012

I remember the Author joining IRC ( The log: http://pastebin.com/Kd8bak7q )
If you look at his previous works here (http://g.e-hentai.org/tag/artist:1st-kuro), you can see he's grown over the last year.

That said, I welcome every new artist.

I look at the facebook page and I think the artist is a woman.

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Crystal3
Three Musqueerteers
joined Sep 25, 2013

Yep :P author is a woman :P

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