Mm, not much to say. Obvious love-triangle melodrama in sight, feel like this is one of those that will drag along and lose my attention.

Anyone knows knows how many chapters out so far?

Well I hope It won't be like that. I like Momono Moto. And It is better than a female rival. Like ex-lover of that women. That kind of thing sucks.

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Interesting setup although I can't say I'm satisfied with it.

That's it! You people have stood in my way long enough. I'm going to clown college!

I like it. It's pretty much typical Momono Moto. And I feel her struggling with the copy machine. Be the first one to make copies in the staff room and the thing just disintegrates. At least the coffee machine was still working.

e: and I wouldn't be too happy if the love triangle gets too much focus. I'd like it more if it's going to be about the emancipation aspect and breaking free.

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A new work by Momono Moto! Yes awesome!
Nice introduction but the main girl's personality is a little boring but I'm looking forward to the new chapter

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Ooh, goody! Something new to attract the Citrus crowd xD Well here's hoping she doesn't just get into a relationship with Haruto just because she can't say no (though that's probably what will happen) and consequently cheat on him with her (which will also probably happen, because duh), or would that be cheating on her with him? Hmm depends on what state their relationship will be I guess.

I've always liked Moto's one-shots. They seem better in comparison to her longer works. Then again only Kimi Koi Limit has been translated so what do I know.

You can never go wrong with office lady yuri.

I like the set up for the yuri moment . The over bearing childhood friend is a new change to the weak and pansy type of childhood friend or MC .

I predict lots of angst.

And a cheating tag too?

Kimi Koi Limit but with a man instead of another girl in office setting. ONE TRICK PONY!? Haha, still love the author though. Angst up the ass though.

It's about time! Josei yuri, yes! Momono Moto, yes, yes and yes! I have a really high hopes for this manga. Nice start. Oh, btw it's an ongoing series, 8 chapters so far.

I don't remember the author so I'm gonna look her/his works.

O.o if it gets too angsty it'll suck.

HEYYY!! it was sooo long since we had a pathetic cliched love triangle yuri pseudo-drama!!!!111 Especially from this author.

Moving pretty fast. Quickly sets up the premise and then straight to sex in the first chapter.

Moving pretty fast. Quickly sets up the premise and then straight to sex in the first chapter.

I dunno, After Hours did that and it's pretty great so far.

Jeeeze you guys. I know there is constructive criticism, but a lot of these replies are just plain unnecessary. If you don't like the artist, the work, and citrus, keep it to yourself. If you have something meaningful to share, then share. Usually I like reading through the comments sections but for this first chapter, many of you are are just being horrible.

Hm. I think I need to read more to figure out how I feel about this. We'll see.

I like the setup this has going for it, definitely interested in more uvu

This remebers me of Octave~ Good work

This remebers me of Octave~ Good work

It definitely gave the Octave vibe.
But this opening is rather weak. Reason for it, I would say, it goes too fast.

"Weak" is probably not the best description. It gives enough information to introduce the Protagonist and her world. But the pace the story goes makes me feel like, if I was the MC, getting hit by a truck then wake up just to ask myself "wtf happened?"

MC's partner is also contradictory both to the theme of the story and her character. She advice MC to take control yet she fails to give MC much option as they both enter that relationship. I probably have misread or misinterpret something, but if I didn't, I'd say the story won't be getting any award for this first chapter.

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It's only one chapter, but so far this is what I wanted Netsuzou Trap to be like. Have the seductive female character get the MC to question societal expectations rather than simply being touchy-feely and manipulative all the time.

My only complaint is that alcohol was involved before things got heated. That's going to hang in the air for the next three or five chapters before it gets let go.

Meh, i wont be following this, just seems like generic angst-bait so far.

Jeeeze you guys. I know there is constructive criticism, but a lot of these replies are just plain unnecessary. If you don't like the artist, the work, and citrus, keep it to yourself. If you have something meaningful to share, then share. Usually I like reading through the comments sections but for this first chapter, many of you are are just being horrible.

I don't even know why Citrus is being mentioned here xD

Hater's gonna hate.

I love Momono Moto's angst. Once I've bought into it, little else in yuri is capable of giving me such feels.

This remebers me of Octave~ Good work

It definitely gave the Octave vibe.
But this opening is rather weak. Reason for it, I would say, it goes too fast.

"Weak" is probably not the best description. It gives enough information to introduce the Protagonist and her world. But the pace the story goes makes me feel like, if I was the MC, getting hit by a truck then wake up just to ask myself "wtf happened?"

MC's partner is also contradictory both to the theme of the story and her character. She advice MC to take control yet she fails to give MC much option as they both enter that relationship. I probably have misread or misinterpret something, but if I didn't, I'd say the story won't be getting any award for this first chapter.

It's "too fast" if you were expecting a series about the pursuit of a gay love or not. The way I see it, it's about Minato's decision on how to go about her life, and, as such, skipping the whole initial drama and moving on to the "torn between" drama is actually pretty good.