Oh... this feels like it's gonna be a slow burn

PACK IN FOR THE SLOW BURN FRIENDS!

I've been curious about this series for a long time. I'm ecstatic to see it picked up! I think the first chapter was pretty nice, too. I like how upfront Ran is.

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oho two characters who start knowing they like girls, and the promise of a confession right from the beginning. I think I'm going to like this series

This already smells to NTR... please let me be wrong.

wait did the pages just get scrambled for anyone else, i wanted to reread it and all of a sudden they're no longer in the correct order

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Yeah I think this got uploaded wrong maybe?

Oooh this looks good! Slow burn love story, huh? Well I wonder if Ami and Ran will become friends after this.

I liked it! Looks really nice and development is interesting

omg 100 pages

BreadBunny posted:

wait did the pages just get scrambled for anyone else, i wanted to reread it and all of a sudden they're no longer in the correct order

Sorry about that! It's fixed now.

Gonna give you some love advice, honey: WRITE VERY LARGE.

i smell ntr

I predict that Yuu will not like Ami back (she seems straight so far) and when she rejects her, Ran and Ami will fall in love. Another possible plot line is a love triangle I suppose.

Timer started now, don't take to long

I had to restart a few times before I realized there were four girls. First I thought the two light-haired girls were the same, then I thought the two dark-haired girls were the same.
It doesn't help that I'm pretty sleepy right now, heh.

This looks like it could have some triangley drama in the future.

I'm very confused as to why people are talking about ntr here. No one is even dating? Doesn't that make it impossible? Am I misunderstanding what ntr means??

I vaguely suspect that Ran might like Ami here.

Dunno why people are allergic to love triangles. They can be done surprisingly well at points

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I vaguely suspect that Ran might like Ami here.

Dunno, why people are allergic to love triangles. They can be done surprisingly well at points

NTR is not really the same thing as a love triangle. In any case I dont get where people are picking up NTR vibes either.

I really wish I could read this but after the first chapter I just can't tell some of these girls apart, as someone said, it took way too much effort to even realize there's multiple :P

4 characters that look so similar to eachother

I'm very confused as to why people are talking about ntr here. No one is even dating? Doesn't that make it impossible? Am I misunderstanding what ntr means??

Ran keeps staring at Ami and gives her an uncomfortable vibe. She correctly observes Ami's feelings and confronts her about them without making it clear whether she's interested in her or inspecting a love rival. Something about that careful holding of the cards to the chest, and the ending set up of the pure affection between Ami and her crush, makes it feel like Ran is going to ruin it for Ami somehow. I wouldn't jump to NTR myself but that's where I think it's coming from, the strange behavior and ambiguity in who she likes.

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I see that people read too much bad hentai nowadays

I really wish I could read this but after the first chapter I just can't tell some of these girls apart, as someone said, it took way too much effort to even realize there's multiple :P

C’mon, folks—pay attention:

• Ami-chan: dark hair, just reaches her shoulders, front fringe blocked straight across.

• Ran-san: dark hair, comes somewhat past her shoulders, irregular front fringe.

• Akari-chan: short light hair.

• Yuu-chan: long light hair, eyes droop down.

[Feel free to cut out this post for future reference as you read along.]

And gods forbid we ever get a scene where they all have their hair up. Or we see them from angles where their hair length isn’t obvious.

I was a little surprised when I noticed after reading that this isn't a oneshot. Not that I am complaining.

And I kinda agree that it was a little hard to tell who is who at first. But it was momentary at least for me.