Rather than talking about all the things I liked in this story, I'm gonna complain about the one thing I didn't like:
Hero-san showed absolutely no reaction to Onnakanbu-san's naked body. >_<
OH, COME ON!!!
What's your problem, Hayate? An amazingly beautiful woman like Honey is in your bed, naked, blushing and flustered, and you don't get even a little bit excited!?
Honey-san, you have your work cut out for yourself with this idiot. It's gonna be very hard...