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joined Nov 25, 2017

I love it

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joined Aug 10, 2016

I'm not sure how to feel about this

joined Aug 22, 2016

Aw, that was cute. Love isn't something that just starts and stops, love often overlaps.

Nezchan Moderator
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joined Jun 28, 2012

I see what the author was going for, but I think the two of them getting to know and like each other was much too vague. So the feelings at the end really don't have much substance.

joined Oct 17, 2016

I see what the author was going for, but I think the two of them getting to know and like each other was much too vague. So the feelings at the end really don't have much substance.

Imo the point is, that it was or at least started onesided as in the former unrequitted love story. But maybe this time the black haired girl wont end up in this situation and something more develops.

joined Jun 30, 2016

This was nice, the pace was fast but still, nice story.

Heihtzz
joined Oct 16, 2016

This author has such a pleasant art style.

Gt00pn-odpc
joined Sep 30, 2017

Fluffy... Want a sequel.

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joined Jan 17, 2017

Very pretty

Nezchan Moderator
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joined Jun 28, 2012

I see what the author was going for, but I think the two of them getting to know and like each other was much too vague. So the feelings at the end really don't have much substance.

Imo the point is, that it was or at least started onesided as in the former unrequitted love story. But maybe this time the black haired girl wont end up in this situation and something more develops.

I know that. But the idea is that the two of them spent time together and got to know each other over the time she kept coming to hopefully run into the other girl. But their conversations at those times are awfully shallow, so we don't see them becoming anything but acquaintances and we need to take it on faith there's anything more between them.

DR2 Hajime Hinata
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joined Jul 20, 2016

After A Love Ends, Another One Starts
I finished the title.

I know that. But the idea is that the two of them spent time together and got to know each other over the time she kept coming to hopefully run into the other girl. But their conversations at those times are awfully shallow, so we don't see them becoming anything but acquaintances and we need to take it on faith there's anything more between them.

I dunno, I see it as Wataya-san already knowing that her kouhai would reject her, making her open to love already by the time she met Araki-san, but yeah their conversations were a bit shallow

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joined May 1, 2017

Very nice

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joined Apr 20, 2013

Thank you

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joined Jul 11, 2015

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joined Nov 26, 2017

You need to move on, fix yourself up, and be happy again.

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joined Mar 26, 2014

This is fucking adorable! <3 I love how easy going it was. Wasn't too angst like.

UranusAndNeptuneAreJustCousins
joined Sep 6, 2015

This is really cute, I like it. Bottled tea, though... why, author-san, why...

Untitled
joined Dec 16, 2014

Does senpai not work? Or not a uni student? Does senpai only stalk kouhais?

Budokan2
joined Jan 13, 2015

pretty good. it was just a one shot so you can't blame the author much for the seemingly abrupt ending.

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joined Oct 7, 2017

Does senpai not work? Or not a uni student? Does senpai only stalk kouhais?

It could be a school that starts late and ends late.
Since this seems placed in high school, it might also be a school where extracurriculars are mandatory, so an extended school time is possible. Not only that, but there are often cram course after the afternoon classes. I'm thinking it might be the "extracurriculars are mandatory" version because the senpai mentions being in a club when she was in school.

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joined Feb 23, 2016

Ummm... more please?~

Hotyangicon3
joined Jun 6, 2013

My heart...! clutches chest So good! I want more. I see your point Nezchan, but there were also undertones of lust and a sort of confession so...I feel like that's how it could develop between heteros too. Besides Senpai x kouhai ftw!

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joined Jul 29, 2017

For more of the same cuteness only with a much sharper edge, see this author's "The First Thrill of Excitement."

One of the great yuri endings.

Healing-punchiiiii
joined Jan 21, 2016

Is this considered age gap? I loved it!

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joined Jan 4, 2014

This is really cute, I like it. Bottled tea, though... why, author-san, why...

The choice strikes me as very realistic for Japan actually. Not just that, but the stuff is also surprisingly good, contrary to the versions you get in the West.

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