Woah, the story has changed quite a bit. For the better, I'd say. Not that the original was bad, I enjoyed that one, but something about the new version flowed better. Also Akari seems a bit more gay this time around, so that's a plus lol
I like the flow and premise of the original one better, though that doesn't make less excited about the fact that it got serialized. I love this author's art and age gap, so I have nothing to complain about. Except the pacing, it seems kinda awkward. Hope it'll get better in future releases.
Oooo I loved the original doujin so I'm excited for this! Love the author's artwork too so I'm glad they caught the attention for a serialization.
That being said I preferred the original premise better. It was more scandalous and fun. There was more sexual tension in the original 2 chapters too and the vibe of the two flowed better. I think Touko came across a lot flirtier in the original too so the contrast between home!Touko and work!Touko was a lot sweeter.
Ch 1 here is a bit awkward and clunky, but maybe it's just because they're trying to get all the stuff from the doujins out of the way so the real story can begin.
Anyway kinda sad about the changes, but I understand that they needed to tone down the child predator vibes for the (more) general public.