Technically, if there's no tongue then it's no adult, so you gals gonna have to redo that scene with tongue to be considered adult, I'm afraid.

You mean like this? https://pa1.narvii.com/6189/52b05983ee9ad1ae6a2323e3ade32a752b8b613c_hq.gif

Either mom have no idea that friend is a hot les or, she's an ex and subtly hooking her with daughter. Or..

AGE GAP YOU SAY? SIGN ME THE FLIP UP!

I'm not too fond of the "useless adult" trope, but it's only chapter 1 so will have to see how this goes.

Praise the yuri gods this is serialization.

broke my mouse i clicked the subscribe button so hard.

Woah, the story has changed quite a bit. For the better, I'd say. Not that the original was bad, I enjoyed that one, but something about the new version flowed better. Also Akari seems a bit more gay this time around, so that's a plus lol

Oh god yes its back and even better

What a spicy way to end the first chapter yessss bless

I like the flow and premise of the original one better, though that doesn't make less excited about the fact that it got serialized. I love this author's art and age gap, so I have nothing to complain about. Except the pacing, it seems kinda awkward. Hope it'll get better in future releases.

I missed this story can't wait to read more

Well, I cannot wait to see the next chapter.

Akari: adults are scary!
Akari: I'm not a kid
Touko: smooch bye!
Akari: fear intensifies

Akari: adults are scary!
Akari: I'm not a kid
Touko: smooch bye!
Akari: fear intensifies

Akari: /calls mother "YO MA. WAT THE FRICK FRACK. UR FREN DUN KISSED ME."
Akari's mom: "... WAT?! I'm coming home RIGHT NOW."

/series ends

Oooo I loved the original doujin so I'm excited for this! Love the author's artwork too so I'm glad they caught the attention for a serialization.

That being said I preferred the original premise better. It was more scandalous and fun. There was more sexual tension in the original 2 chapters too and the vibe of the two flowed better. I think Touko came across a lot flirtier in the original too so the contrast between home!Touko and work!Touko was a lot sweeter.

Ch 1 here is a bit awkward and clunky, but maybe it's just because they're trying to get all the stuff from the doujins out of the way so the real story can begin.

Anyway kinda sad about the changes, but I understand that they needed to tone down the child predator vibes for the (more) general public.

I liked the original premise better to be honest, though i'll surely read this as well.

Yeah, me too. Also, I feel like the kiss was really rushed here, which baffles me cause this is the serialized version so the author should have more time to set it up?

Technically, if there's no tongue then it's no adult, so you gals gonna have to redo that scene with tongue to be considered adult, I'm afraid.

You mean like this? https://pa1.narvii.com/6189/52b05983ee9ad1ae6a2323e3ade32a752b8b613c_hq.gif

Nah, we all know that you to hold hand to be an adult.

Can we just let straight people keep the idea that having to play surrogate mother for a grown ass adult who is too lazy to do basic housework is romantic?

So this author thought about this pair for 4-5 years before it got serialized?

Great... yet another predator.

About time T^T

"I had someone that did this for me but we parted ways"

I say an ex coming back is in the horizon

"I had someone that did this for me but we parted ways"

I say an ex coming back is in the horizon

Maybe they got sick of playing unpaid maid.

I wonder if Touka's X was Akari's mom? We know her mom is single and that Akari never met Touka even tho she's meant to be her mom's friend- maybe she hasn't met her because she's the X?

I never usually cared what this author put out, I just love their art style.

Age gap? Sexy OL? School Girl?

HELL YEAHH! SUBSCRIBED!

The plot changed a lot. This feels more cliche and rushed than the original but also gayer.

My theory is that the one who cleaned her shit and stuff was MC mother huehuehue.

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