i have NO idea whats goin on

This. I'm like wut?

Does this mean we won't get anymore Bright and Cherry Amnesia? D:

i have NO idea whats goin on

This. I'm like wut?

Does this mean we won't get anymore Bright and Cherry Amnesia? D:

Croxx picked it up because the other translators were taking too much time.

Ugh, boring yuri baiting.

The distant future and yet...

"To even date girls... That's gotta be a joke"

Meh.

its been a long time since ive read something this jumbled.

i think i need to sleep now, let my brain regain its thinkers and thunkers.

So, uh, the plot revolves around a game that rates people and has you collect them like objects, using their feelings as stepping stones for getting further in the game. And it's got the added bonus of there being an alien race that sociopathically does this by treating our planet the same way the alien in Predator treats it, and seems to attach a monetary value or something to it. Since this is Tamamusi I'm going for the benefit of the doubt, but so far this has the framework of a cringe filled seasonal harem anime.

Hope I'm wrong. I really really hope I'm wrong. Tamamusi don't make my faith collapse.

Yeah this is a really uncomfortable premise for me especially since the protagonist is apparently just going to go along with it.

Tamamusi's first serialized manga and... I don't know how I feel about this. I have to wait for more chapters. At least it's a short series.

The lack of exposition makes this super confusing.

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Maybe he wanted one of his works to have anime adaptation, 4-koma with all yurish girls are top anime these times.

things that I don't understand from this first chapter

1. why aliens come to earth
2. why they looks like a human
3. wtf is that application

I really hope Nozomi will win Kakoi's heart in the next chapter...
human should not be defeated by alien !

i have no idea what this chapter was about apart from groping

Hummm well, I at least enjoy this. I want to see where this going.
I mean, of what I understand, some aliens go from planet to planet, searching R's girls. We don't know, yet, how this ranks works, but we know that they exist and that if you cleared them you can obtain money and "the "Heart of the Girl"".
Plus of that, we see that, even with the program, your attack can make 0 damage. That remembers me how Lily Rank works in HDN saga, because 0 it's like "I hate you" but if you increase it it's like "fall in love" (and it's what the alien want to do) and that if you haven points you need to buy them (and that will be released in the second chapter).
We couldn't see so much of the story (it's only the first chapter and half of it was the introduction) but we could see how Nozomi sended a message at Kakoi and that something happened between them, because Kakoi didn't answer. In fact, when Kakoi said "It's not possible for me to even fall in love with anyone at this moment" she tried to look at Nozomi, but she refused. What's more, Nozomi said "I want' us to be the same... As before..."
I mean, you could not like the theme of the story or think it's a little rushed, but I don't see that this chapter was that crazy to put the What the fuck I am reading? tag *thinking emonji*
For me it's just a story about aliens trying to gain something from other planets, with some "cute girls doing cute things", two, friends?, with problems (I bet that it's because Nozomi is in love with Kokoi and she turned her down), humor and I can get the vibe of they'll have problems because they are all girls. I can see this more like a love triangle than a harem but hey, it's just the first chapter. I want to read more of this (Tamamusi never disappoint!)

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This was crazy, but maybe it settles down and avoids the cringe as the concept has potential to at least be something different.

I'll give it a few chapters, Tamamusi hasn't gone wrong before.

Kind of amazing how Tamamusi's art suffers when it's polished up to this degree. Her usual. rougher style is tremendously appealing, but with the inks and tones and so on in place, this ends up looking more or less like any number of other standard, semi-ecchi, oddball comedies.

So with the most appealing parts of her art gone, and the fun, generally down-to-earth (to say nothing of adult life) aspects of her stories gone, it's sad to see how generic this ends up, even with the wild premise.

I'm glad I'm not an idiot and everybody else is just as confused as I am.

Well, I'll see where it goes. I've definitely read more confusing.

It doesn't make sense because it's just the first chapter. The game is explained later on, so if you would just have an ounce of patience, maybe you'd actually not sound as asshole as you do now.

If you had made that comment, say, 5-7 chapters in with people still questioning the story, then it would have been fine. But by criticizing people in the first chapter, you make yourself look just as impatient as those questioning the work.

I hate stories that start with them jumping right into it not explaining anything... but the art is still enough to grab me. Let's see where it goes.

Ehhh . . . people have been saying it's weird. It's not weird, it's just stupid crappy shounen style. It seems strange if you're not used to how unnatural and stylized their premises often are.

The distant future and yet...

"To even date girls... That's gotta be a joke"

Meh.

I'm not sure that it is the Distant Future, I think it might be around the current decade with Aliens secretly visiting Earth

The distant future and yet...

"To even date girls... That's gotta be a joke"

Meh.

I'm not sure that it is the Distant Future, I think it might be around the current decade with Aliens secretly visiting Earth

IN THE NOT TOO DISTANT FUTURE, NEXT SUNDAY AD

And here I was waiting for amnesia series

Tamasumi is doing a new one. Instant fave

i really like this style, cant wait to see more

It's impressive how much sense this didn't make.

Made perfect sense to me. It's like a combo of a waifu collecting game card game (Idolm@ster/kankolle/etc), Pokemon Go and a dating sim but set in reality. The screen presents you with options to score love points (see the meter on the screen) to raise your affection points. Presumably after you "win" the card/girl you get some power that we've yet to see yet. The fuzz-ball automatically installed an app on her phone for using it.

It doesn't make sense because it's just the first chapter. The game is explained later on, so if you would just have an ounce of patience, maybe you'd actually not sound as asshole as you do now.

If you had made that comment, say, 5-7 chapters in with people still questioning the story, then it would have been fine. But by criticizing people in the first chapter, you make yourself look just as impatient as those questioning the work.

Wouldn't it be weirder to tell people to be patient that "the story will explain itself" when its already this far down the line? 5-7 chapters would be ample time for the author to flesh out the characters and give proper exposition by then